you know what? i really hate fanfics. they distort characters. but urs wasn't so terrible i guess. some r disgusting

Hi! Great story, I'm just reviewing to put this story on my favs list.

That was great.

Issabat! Bat! Mweee... Excellent story.

OH THAT WAS SO VERY YUMMY! Wait yummy...that does not sound like me. HMMMMM.(Thinks for a second and then remembers the seagull holding her like a puppet and forcing her to move and blurt stupid phrases out of her head.) Oh yes thats right...hmmmm. Well anyway lovely story. The characters were perfect. My I just say it was- SUPER DEEE DUPER! That was the acursed seagull not me. NOT MEEEEEEEEEEEEE! AAARRRGGGGGGGG!Closes velvet cutian that says "One moment if you will..." while giant seagull death noises are emiating from within. YAY THE SEAGULL DIED! HE WAS EVIL SO I FEEL NO NEED TO MOURN!)

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Woah! Awesome!

Oooo! Nice! Mr. Picklesworth? Uh... Sorry about that, I'm rambling again to my lil' pets. It was a very good story and I liked it. *mutters something unintelliable* Yes, yes! It was magical! I must go!

This is better than what I found for Oogie's resurrection. I like Verie, she's a cutie, though Jack and Sally suddenly becoming prisoners threw me off for a bit. Other than that, perfect story. Absolutely perfect.

lol, that's amusing...but the thing is...hehheh, I always like to (and like others to) play up the romance in fanfics...but o well

I liked that a lot. I didn't know bats could gasp, lol

Very sweet, cute and such . Could ya write a sweet story about jack and sally?

This is so cute! Cuddles and Nuggles to ya!

Awww... I liked the Oggie resurrection. Vampire bats are cool, good choice for a Zero playmate!

Yay! Spiffy ficcyness! I like Verie, and the end with all the fire. I like fire. Very good use of lyrics too. _

I like it! Bravo! Perhaps you could add a scene explaining how Jack and Sally were suddenly kidnapped/captured by Oogie Boogie, otherwise the story is very good. *Thumbs Up*