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| Demyx55 2004-12-22 ch 1,  | abuseHi! Great story, I'm just reviewing to put this story on my favs list. |
| H.E.P. 2004-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was great. |
| Daniel 2002-11-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseIssabat! Bat! Mweee... Excellent story. |
| Lina the DeMeNtEd reviewer 2002-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseOH THAT WAS SO VERY YUMMY!!!! Wait yummy...that does not sound like me. HMMMMM.(Thinks for a second and then remembers the seagull holding her like a puppet and forcing her to move and blurt stupid phrases out of her head.) Oh yes thats right...hmmmm. Well anyway lovely story. The characters were perfect. My I just say it was- SUPER DEEE DUPER! That was the acursed seagull not me. NOT MEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! AAARRRGGGGGGGG!!!!!Closes velvet cutian that says "One moment if you will..." while giant seagull death noises are emiating from within. YAY THE SEAGULL DIED!!! HE WAS EVIL SO I FEEL NO NEED TO MOURN!) ~Ja' |
| STF 2002-09-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseWoah! Awesome!! |
| Zabbie Q. 2002-09-15 ch 1, | abuseOooo! Nice! Mr. Picklesworth?? Uh... Sorry about that, I'm rambling again to my lil' pets. It was a very good story and I liked it. *mutters something unintelliable* Yes, yes! It was magical! I must go! |
| Nightmare1 2002-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is better than what I found for Oogie's resurrection. I like Verie, she's a cutie, though Jack and Sally suddenly becoming prisoners threw me off for a bit. Other than that, perfect story. Absolutely perfect. |
| someone 2002-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abuselol, that's amusing...but the thing is...hehheh, I always like to (and like others to) play up the romance in fanfics...but o well |
| killinjoke 2002-05-31 ch 1, | abuseI liked that a lot. I didn't know bats could gasp, lol |
| Valo 2002-04-18 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet, cute and such ^.^ Could ya write a sweet story about jack and sally? |
| Sirr 2002-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is so cute! Cuddles and Nuggles to ya!! |
| BlueberryPancakes 2002-01-28 ch 1, | abuseAwww... I liked the Oggie resurrection. Vampire bats are cool, good choice for a Zero playmate! |
| Linzy 2002-01-28 ch 1, | abuseYay! Spiffy ficcyness!! I like Verie, and the end with all the fire. I like fire. Very good use of lyrics too. ^_^ |
| Cat's Meow 2002-01-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it! Bravo! Perhaps you could add a scene explaining how Jack and Sally were suddenly kidnapped/captured by Oogie Boogie, otherwise the story is very good. *Thumbs Up* |
| Crazyboy 2002-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abusePlooah, that was great! I'm gonna give you another hug! *hugs again* |