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Pullmanlover 4/29/05 . chapter 1
Wow, I'm sending lots of reviews today. Sorry if they annoy you.

This is even better than the other one. The thing with the numbers...statistics. I think I'm a good writer. I couldn't in a million years write gold like this! You are at the top of the heap, but the heap is at the bottom of a bigger heap. Get to the real top! Go for original fiction!

Pullmanlover
modestlobster 1/23/02 . chapter 1
That was really interesting - the entire concept with the President, his numbers, and his truths. Nice.e
Baked Goldfish 1/23/02 . chapter 1
Just, um, wow. The imagery of the numbers as water was just amazing. Wow.
mdime 1/23/02 . chapter 1
Beautiful, as always...
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