This was more of a Crima/Friendship story in my opinion. This story was really great. Great descrptions in such little words. :) Kinda weird how I guessed the Unsub would actually be a woman, although I'd love to know why she was attacking pregnant women working as waitresses.

Amazing job on this story. Epilougue please? Or a minor sequel of their Christmas?

Very short but very wonderful!

Aha! You had more surprises in order...very nice. I liked how you resolved the primary action story, but was even more impressed with the delicate way you handled the characters revealing their inner secrets & feelings. You left the words unspoken, but yet somehow expressed the thoughts clearly. I think this is your best story yet!

I liked the surprise of this chapter. I thought you were going for an easy resolution, but it was just a red herring...nicely done. The profile seemed very believable to me. The emotional aspects of the story were handled well too. You gave us empathy for a guy you normally wouldn't like. And you gave us hints about past decisions and hidden feelings (that perhaps weren't a surprise to people more familiar). Looking forward to the next installment...

I like the story's progression in part 2. What I really like about your writing style is how visual it is, without going overboard with too many details. I'm able to easily see what's going on. I would've really liked to have seen the interview with Sarah though...because it was obviously a stressful exchange and key to the story. Looking forward to more...

First of all, it's good to see another story from you. I thought your opening paragraph was very visual and powerful...and it quickly sucked me into the story. The office scene was a bit harder for me because I'm not familiar with the show or its past stories. However, the main characters were distinct and I picked up on the group dynamics easily. I assume Hotch was already waiting in the conference room? That was the only part that lost me a little. I'm looking forward to seeing how they find the culprit and deal with the crime's personal aspects (some of which I can only guess at being a newbie).

I really enjoyed your story. It's well written and everything seems to fall in the right place: the case, the interaction between the BAU membrers and, of course, the feelings developing between H/P. You did a great job with those two. They are driven, intese and delicate at the same time, as we learnt to know them on screen. I really hope you'll go on writing for this pairing, which I happen to adore... ;)

Great story! Looking forward to your next one!

a lovely story with a nice happy ending! Look forward to the next one!

Nice ending! :D

Lovely! very lovely! Hotch...what can we say about our favourite hero? Dashing...passionate...compassionate...dashing...o h i said that already! oh well, you get my picture!

this is truly a beautiful story of the two! LOVE!

thank you!

Julia

Happy New Year to you too!

H/P forever!

amazing end and I believe in miracles I know someone how did one

That was good! Great job!

Ah I loved it! You did a fantastic job! I can't wait for your next story. )

Happy New Year.

Libby

Hi! Thank you so much for including the part with Rossi, Love it! Great Fic, cant wait for more of yours! I wish you a very good New Year!