I find this funny as hell. Does it make me a horrible person since I laughed while reading this fic? Yes? Good.

Good Story i love it )

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Great cliffhanger, I look forward to reading more of you're work.

Seattle? What could there possibly be in Seattle?

Kinda feels like a filler than a chapter 'shrugs'

You have problems man, but at least you know you have problems.

"Love to stay and make a homemade video of you two screwing each other. But i've got some sh*t to take care of."

It's official, Freud is now my all-time favorite OC. Course like I said earlier, I really wouldn't mind if you made you're chapters a bit longer.

RAINING BLOOD!

AWESOME, but what's the name of the other song?

They suffocated in the radiation of the bomb.

...Dark...

I found this chapter interesting, not only for Freud's backstory but for the fact that seeing you're past writing has given me a glimpse into how much you've improved. It's like seeing a child take it's first steps and then seeing it walk.

It's pretty cool.

So dark and so short. Not as good as the last two chapters but still pretty damn awesome. I like Julian's reaction to the apocalypse, you kept him perfectly in character and allowed for a couple of funny-yet-quite-dark- one liners. I'd like to see what a guy like you could do if given the chance to write a blockbuster movie.

"I heard you the first time, ya spoiled rotten bitch. I just don't really care right now."

Another great line! I'm beginning to like this Freud character.

"Like a bowl of rainbows with chocolate strawberries ground inside. Now stop asking questions before I slap you!"

That's a great line, just thought i'd point it out.

A wonderful blend of light and shadow. Mort's words and Marlene's reactions were used brilliantly to create a great scene! Though I wouldn't mind if you made you're chapters a bit longer...

Kinda depressing, but funny at the same time. I noticed a couple grammer mistakes, but it doesn't distract from the story so there's no use in complaining!