I really like this, the way that you've considered the different viewpoints and the dilemma Raine and Sheena face.

I do like the meloncholy theme of this fic but. . . I'm very confused by it. I don't remember Sheena knowing of the Chosen's fate before Lloyd and Genis did after reaching the Tower of Salvation. I'm pretty sure she was in the dark about it too. . . But Raine's words / narration / whatever you would call it was excellent. She's a very intelligent woman who very rarely lets her emotions overrule her logic. I think that you chose her words very carefully based on that characteristic and I'm appreciative.

And of course I love anything about Collet, since she's my favorite, just like Raine is yours!