This is so cute!

I love the way they express each other's 'pure' feelings. :))

Aww. How sweet.

I liked how this lemon had a nice pure atmosphere to it; majority of the time, smut here on is done rough and dirty, haha.

Loved the romantic ending. :)

Very 'virgin' story

... the first straight lemon Ive ever read o.o ... and it was hot XD Fluffy but hot. Thank you! You were my first! Roflmao XD

I love how innocent it was! Yay!

first huh? well, it wasn't bad... but i think u could do better. yeah.

otherwise, it's good. make some a bit spicier nxt time, okay. Rock on. ;

If this is your first time to do a lemon fic. you're not so bad yourself. (no offense) I mean, the fic is really, really great! It's only that it's too... i mean... fast... if you get what i mean but if you don't, it's ok. I'm sorry... Your fic is really nice. I'm not really a fan of Detective Conan myself, but i watch it sometimes, a friend of mine said that your fic was great and she said that reading it is a MUST.

Neat. After reading that, I'm thinking of making one of my own stories like how you did. I liked it a lot. I always thought, Jimmy and Rachel made a perfect couple.

-Mathew

cute

too cute...

great that is really great!

AW! So KAWAII! This is just something so cute. _

[andi'...haha]

*sniffs* That was the best Ran Shincih fanfic I ever read.

that was good