awww cute!

Cute story!

Awwww! What a sweet story. Alice and Jasper are so frickin' cute together! Even as children, they are meant to be, and Jasper will always protect his Alice.

Awwww. Sweet. Wonder who won the contest. Ever thought of another chapter, about Alice being taken away and evemtaully losing her memory?

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! That was amazing. I'm not lying. You should be a professional writer. AWWWW I cannot get over how cute that was!

Natalie

Just...beautiful,

I adored this.

It brought me to near tears.

Alice was so sad and defenceless.

I fell in love with Jasper all over again.

They really are my favourite couple:)

I mean, I love Bella and Edward,

But Alice and Jasper have so much more depth to their relationship.

It was lovely,

Thank you.

-Breathless Tomb-

You have to expand this. You have to have to have to. :D

Very amazing oneshot!

Your story has been validated and accepted into The Kid Contest.

Good Luck!

Aww!

all right, usually I avoid reading children stories, but I had to try this one since you wrote it.

and I loved it! it's just so CUTE!

the way they spoke and thought, it really seemed like they were children. SO adorable. great job!

Naw! This is soo adorable! I loved it! Awesome job :D

AW that was so sweet!

Ah, there we go! I was wondering when this story would ever show up, 'cause it took the longest time ever. :P

So yeah. The part about corporal punishment... that made me flinch. It's just not right, no matter what century we're in. -_-x

I also really love this quote:

"What he didn’t say was that he respected the girl for sleeping alone outside every night. He could do it, of course, but he was a man."

Hehehhe Jasper tries to be all macho. :) Of course, it just backs up everything we always talk about regarding men... *snickers*

My heart still aches at the idea that Alice sleeps outside in the garden. But it's a good thing it's summer. Actually you know what, I'd sleep outside. xD But she's such a young girl.

Mr. and Mrs. Brandon should be sent to an asylum... xD