As you ask in your poll - yes, I definitively think your story deserves some more work. For instance, you should give a second read to your text looking for typos like having first names in low case before publishing it. But, that said; please write more so we can see this story developed.

I LOVE Bob Fics! Please update soon! :)

I really like the beginning of this story. Bob is my favorite character and when reading this i can really picture this happening in the series please continue i want to read more!