I read that whole bit remarkably fast. _ I like Dav. Why did he have to go and disappear?

Oh, I am so pleased with myself. I had already previously guessed that Sylphiel was Xellos' other half's reincarnation. _ Yay for me. I hope Xellos ends up being okay, though... I really like him, a lot. I don't think I'll be happy if you kill him. *sniff*

And HOW did he manage to pop back to where Sylphiel was? Weren't they in the desert, where he couldn't teleport?

I think this is the last one I saw on your profile... but I hope I'm wrong. I want more Xellos and Zelgadis teasing, and for Zel to stop being stupid and run screaming into Amelia's arms.

Okay... maybe not screaming, but singing "Happy Happy Joy Joy" to irritate Xellos would be funny. _

More please.

Umbrae Calamitas

Interesting, waiting for the rest of the story.

well, it seems that I have forgotten to review this excellent story. Bad Drez, Bad!

Quite the interesting take you have on it. especially the fist person perspective. It is often dificult to write extensively in that format, but you did it wonderfully.

Loved the "acid" part. And the Lina/Gourry bit. I especially found the "sympathy pains" segment amusing, as it happened to my father when my mom was pregnant with me. Or so I am told. And, despite what some seem to think, it is a viable phenomenon. Especially with people as in tune with each other as Lina and Gourry.

Anyway, the grammar was good, the format was good, the level of detail was excellent, and the story arch is wonderful. Keep it up!

All in all, an excellent fic that I hope gets continued soon. 9.3/10

I'm beginning to feel really sorry for Gourry... Pregnant women already have some mood swings, add Lina's temper in their and you end up with plenty of Dragon Slaves.

this last chapter was cute! i liked the lina-gourry baby thing. sweet! and funny!

I am happy sylph found someone. I love where this is going. Lina and Gourry are too funny here. Cannot wait to see where this goes.

oops I started @ chapter 4 0.o Well now that i've backtracked it makes much more sense ;;; It's nice to see Sylph picking up the pieces of her life...even if they tend to start going to hell again. Good job generally staying IC ... although of course, Luna is almost pure speculation.

Wow! I can't wait for the next chapter! What's going to happen next?

Oh! This is very good! Another of the many sequels to tryptich, I can't wait for more.

sylpheils got a man at home!

Whooo!

Very very good!

I am loving loving your stories!

Write More!

Keep it up!