very nice I had a little tear well done

Cute! Kawaii!

I loved it!

AW! SO CUTE! SO...AW!

Hm! Another one-shot song-fic from you! Good work!

Again the characters (that would be your beloved Akira and Takumi!) are completely believable and your style is good too.

For me the beginning wasn't so sad nor the ending was too happy. And that angry Takumi who "would never forgive anyone who tried to hurt his Akira" was kind of funny for me!

That was very bad about your computer! Remember to always have backup copies of your important files!

Keep up with good work! Hm!