*Sniff* That was really good... (All I can say)

that was sad. i fort it was bout dreams, not death?

well written and very heart wrenching.

i cried for ages after reading this, the poem at the end suited the story well.

one of the few slash fanfics i fond and i liked it. keep on writing these but not so sad next time.

I normally don't go for Slash fics, but this one was pretty good... :)

Ah, beautiful writing. You could explain more about the ropes though, and why Bubbles felt that way. Still. It was good.

Awwwwww...That's so sad. Poor Bubbles. This fic is so original(because it ends with Shakespear's poem? %( Never could understand his works. Or maybe it was the only fic Buttercup acted like a girl in her teenage years?).

Very sweet! It was sad that Bubbles died, but at least she was happy. And what did cause the compound stroke? (I suppose its not that important, just wondering...)

A very moving first PPG piece for FFNet. I almost cried when I read it. Keep it up. More soon.