cn i have my cookie now i think i no wats going to happen

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Yeah! That was really good! _

that was so cute!

That was a great story. good job.

Yet another story read! And this one seemed so realistic, yet a fairy tail at the same time. Age does often get in the way and it turns everyone away from the great relationship that could be. If you think about it, those are the ones that last though. Celine Dion and her husband (though I hate her anyway), Shania Twain and her husband.plus all my friends that have parents years apart are the ones that seem to still be together. But anyhoo, the fairy tail is the happy ending. Goten was willing to do anything to be with her, so he made himself younger and got more powerful. Sweet. And I also like how you added Goku in here. I was wondering if you added him in any of your fics and I guess this answers my question! Great going! ::thumbs up::

you spelled vegita wrong, it's V-E-G-E-T-A, not V-E-G-I-T-A. thats how it's spelled on the offical website

Hey this was great. I read the 1 and 2 ch. long time ago. Then i stubled on them tonight. Really good.

this is so kool i love the plot i hope you will add more im hooked

Awwww...*wipes away a tear* I think I have something in my eye.

You're a very talented writer - has anyone ever told you that? Clever idea, using the Namek DragonaBalls. I'll admit I didn't guess it...no cookie for me. :(

Keep writing! Especially Bra/Goten fics! BEST COUPLE EVER!

I really liked this chapter. hurry up and make the next one. I hope they have a baby.

very good i liked the story a lot

That was soooooo kawaii! I loved it, You're soooo good!

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that was a nice fic Goten is the best and so is bra.

Ah that was so sweet

I loved it. It was so sweet and nice.