Great story! It's a very interesting take on Season 2 and it feels a lot like the show... very enjoyable! Ames' explanation to Tash's double identity was so credible, and even when I'm such a ML addict the most attracting thing to this story was Tash and her relationship with Dean.

This last chapter was amazing, starting with Logan's loneliness and sadness, but ending with the promise of a much better future, not only for him, but for everybody.

A really great story, well written and well thought out, looking forward to reading more of your work.

greaat story , look forward to the next

This was really good. I like it when people put a diffrent spin on things. Well done!

Kimmy Kimmy Kimmy...I swear if you don't hurry up and get those two together...ok, I know it's only chapter 2. So I'll give you some time...lol...this coming from the girl who's well, read the fic and you'll see what I mean, but I'm such a hypocrit..

But anywho, this is good girl. I like Jenny, she's cool with me, hey...you're not gonna have her steal Logan away are you? You better not...Oh well it is your story and it's already completed so what I am doing threatening you? I'm dumb I know.

Well, great job hun!

I FINALLY started it. Kimmy I am sooooo proud of myself. It's really great so far...and do I detect some family reunions...cause I'm thinking that Jenny is Logan's sister...hmm I dunno, maybe. Can't wait to read the next chapter

Very good story, thanks so much for sharing.

Great so far...cant wait to read more..only the part about them copulating...i think Manticore would be watching or taping giving Max no chance to lie about what happened

Great story

HRmmZ...dont be fooled by the chapter number it sayz im reviewin...this is for chapter 9 since i screwed up the last one...newayz..remind me never to do that squinty face...dunzt seem to work to well with this thinga-mabob ] yeahz...so this is the end for dean yeahz...since he'll be in jail for some time...i guess jenny got all the time in the world to do what she wantz / haha while poor dean sitz in jail "tossin peoples salad" oh well...i spose jail life will be a good experience for the man. anywayz...gettin to my point. i have to say kim, great story *clapz* i wish i could write like this myself one day hahaa...it seems that girlz dig this kind ob thing...must be the new groove going round ] thx heapz for doin it for me...looking forward to readin your next one!* peace out my hippy fwen!*

_ keke baiiz kim

oHhhhHh mann ..

Yay, another chapter! And yay, they're back! Keep it coming. This is very good. :)

A good chapter; angsty. Very smart, beginning with Logan's POV. I SO love the L/A in this! I know this story's M/L, and that's cool, but I think Asha deserved at least this chance to try things with Logan, so it was good of you to give her one. Plus Logan had been waiting for Max for so long...his trying a relationship with Asha only makes sense. Makes me wish they could have a story of their own, though :) Are there any truly happy L/As out there? (sigh) I don't think so. And poor Dean. Logan's meeting with him was interesting. And everyone's reunited! :) THat's wonderful. Can't help but feel a little pissy at Max for leaving Logan in the dark all this time, but she did have her reasons. Looking forward to more.

Interesting. And very dramatic. Good Max and Alec characterizations especially (but, then, I've told you how good your characterizations are repeatedly, so I guess I didn't need to mention that :P The scenes between Jenny and Dean were, as always, very good. I wish he wouldn't have ended up in such a bad position, but the story's not over yet, right? :) Gotta go read more.

Interesting twist. I was wondering how Jenny's identity as an X5 would be explained. How upsetting for her. Good work.