why didnt Ash want to see Misty?

i don't know if u still read ur reveiw but,this is a great story, and one thing i have to point out is...how come it takes u ages to update, u last updated in 2002 and it 2006 now (sorry) but u authors take too long. well sometimes ;)

This is a wicked story and i really want to know wat happens next so update very soon. :)

i really like this please do more

plz plz plz continue! this is getting so awesome! your format seems odd but i love it anyways. you havent updated for years! get to it plz!

Hello, this is soposed to be for chapter 11 but those stupid regection codes _

Hi, how are you. I read this one at the Pokemon Tower too but i felt like reading it again to see if it was finished. It is so great and really good so PLEASE update soon.

I love cliffhangers. I've thoroughly enjoyed this story. I hate it when certain authors (in this case they're all female by coincidence) wait dozens and dozens of years before continuing such terrific stories.

I love cliffhangers.

I've thoroughly enjoyed this story.

Finish it, inless you want to deal with Bob The Magic Monkey.

This story rocks. The Ash/Butch thing kinda freaked me out though... Oo; Heh... Anyways, I can't wait until chapter 12!

Finish Master The Unexpected!

Please Please Update! I love your story so far.

I hope that you are going to include some pokemon battles in your story, because I am a talent agent, and I would love for you to win 5,000 dollars!

VERY interested in what happens next, so please continue! -

I really, really hope you continue this! I HATE cliffhangers and I really hope to see this continued soon! And it was even published on my b-day!

Keep up the awesome work! _

Enja

Togepretty stories forever! Heehee. I love 'em. Your a great writer and this story has got everything. Romance, action, mystery...everything! Keep it up and I cant wait for the next part