Ookaaay... Creepy much? I actually managed to get across that bridge without falling! ;)

Ohohohoho! Witty. I enjoyed.

Wait, sackboy respawns without visible injury, and is nigh invunerable if there's a nearby checkpoint.

What's more, HE used RESET, not LBP! So... He's mad at LBP because HE killed himself. What.

Also the title should be the LITTLEbig adventure if it's so short

an amazing fic, I wish this was alot more then a one-shot!

this is exactly what happens in the game... not very original. needs work. A few of the lines were funny, but you need to work on making you stories longer and more original.

Aww poor Sackboy he was terrified at the end.

I laughed. xD
Good job at describing exactly how you feel when you start a new adventure in LittleBigPlanet. :D

youre right!

i think this sucks halo7458963's is better!

that's just basically level 1 with a funny end

Humorous. It is pretty good. It reminds me of when i made my first sackboy and had no way to get out of the ditch. I am gonna say that this was a 7/10. It could have been better.

hi check out halo7458963s littlebig planet story its better

Haha! Nice fic! xD I found only one real thing wrong with this, and it was just a dumb little typo. On one of your 'quickly's, you accidentally added a 0 in there. You should go and fix that. :P