A wonderful story, full of drama and excitement-10 out of 10 stars! And I like how you left open the possibility of the villains coming back one day, later or sooner . . .

Cool.

An interesting start. :)

nice!

I love that the dog is called Doctor - how funny! I really like how you explore the differences in the alternate universe.

This is very intriguing! I want to know what happens next and I want to know if the gift the Doctor.2 has for Rose is a ring!

Still hooked. Can't wait to see who else shows up. I wonder who Donna would be and if she would be kidnapped? Anyway looking forward to another chapt.

So we saw Sarah Jane and this universe version of Martha... Please! Pretty please: I want to see captain Jack! And Donna too of course ;)

Seems like the Doctor's companions are showing up, Sarah Jane in a previous part, now Melissa/Martha Jones. I wonder what's going on and why was Melissa kidnapped, and not Rose or Sarah Jane.

Really enjoying your story. Can't wait to read more.

Please continue. I really want to know what happens next.

:)

This story immediately caught my eye when I came on to the site, and I adore it already. It's a fascinating premise, well written, and I'm hooked on it just from two chapters.

I can't wait to read more. Props to you for giving him a name other than John Smith!

a nice start with many questions, are Rose and the Doctor just friends soon to be lovers or ? Looking forward to finding out.

Interesting beginning. Sarah Jane, hm? I wonder what she is doing here. An undercover investigation, maybe?