|Reviews for The Avatar|
| Nebelkind 2/20/12 . chapter 5
I wonder what the Vulcans have to say about Kirk being turned into one...
I mean his looks are a dead give away about his not being a normal Vulan that alone should cause some trouble for him...
Please update soon again!
| Creamy 12/7/10 . chapter 5
I just found this on the kink meme. Enjoyed it a lot. Wish there was more. :)
| SeverusDmitri18 9/6/10 . chapter 5
Well, That's cool. Anymore chapters?
| Ox King 8/21/10 . chapter 5
Please, please, update soon.
| Ox King 4/28/10 . chapter 5
Loved this chapter. I went back and re-read it all. You did a great job making me laugh. I hope you have another chapter in the works. Thanks for taking the time to write for us fans.
| Renuki 2/7/10 . chapter 5
And I still want to punch those people in the face. Over and over.
*grins at Pike*
'I sure hope so. I really do. Because I’m not going to give up the best thing to ever happen to me without a fight.'
And I am sure that there will be others that are ready to help you fight for it. :D
| JinxyKat 2/7/10 . chapter 5
Thank you for the update chapter. You have a unique story plot.
| mildetryth 2/7/10 . chapter 5
This is SO cool I don't have words for it!
| Ayamxam 1/10/10 . chapter 1
very interesting i look forward to see what happens next
| Ox King 1/6/10 . chapter 4
This story is fantastic. I love the plot. It's very unique. Unique is very special to me. I think your doing a fantastic job of paying attention to detail. I wish you would tell us how Jim Kirk got into the body of a Vulcan avatar. Keep up the good work and thanks for taking the time to write for us Star Trek fans.
| jenetri 1/6/10 . chapter 4
| Kat 1/5/10 . chapter 4
I hope that they(starfleet, don't give the captain a hard time for that. I hope these people are denined into the federation by the vulcans. Love the story, and I hope that you up-date soon!
| LostSchizophrenic 1/5/10 . chapter 4
Very interesting idea-I don't suppose you've been to see the movie 'Avatar'...? Anyway, I'm enjoying this story greatly and can't wait for more! As a suggestion...Kirk's personality and mind are still intact and he's a very tactile person...how would this/wouldn't this change now that he's a Vulcan-a touch-telepath? Also, how would Winona react to finding out her son is now physically a Vulcan? And Pike (since he seems to be kind of a mentor to Kirk)? How does Spock react to having someone who is physically Vulcan on the ship? Also...much as I loved this chapter I have to say...it seems radically unbelievable that Kirk would be cleared for duty *immediately* after being handed a bombshell of 'sorry, your human self died so your stuck being a Vulcan for the rest of your life.' Bones would've at least made him take 48 hours off or on restricted duty-no access to the Bridge, let alone allowed to handle sensitive diplomatic missions right away...anyway...I hope you update soon!
| Maranni123 1/5/10 . chapter 4
Rushed? It didn't seemed rushed to me! :D Great chapter! Your plot is so original, it's like a breath of fresh air! XD Please, you must update again soon, okay? 10/10!
| Kate Andromeda 1/4/10 . chapter 3
I love this story idea so fare. Difficulties could be: better smell and taste senses. I think that Vulcan food is very not tasting because of it. Also the vegetarian eating habits of Vulcans, the better hearing, (temperature and telepathy and strength you already mentioned.)Maybe his long life span can be good and bad. Maybe he will also ask himself who he is now that he is not really genetically related to his family. Pon Farr will definatly become a problem. And I am curious if he will be able to use his heighten senses corrected and not get overloaded by them. So, much potentcial. Please update soon.