Excellent one-shot! I really liked it. Bah. I don't support Quifer either.

Hehe, I especially liked the 'ODD NOISES. EXPLAIN." bit.

Nice ficcy.

Returning the favour I suppose you could call it. Pity I can't come up with anything original to say about your writing. It's really good. REALLY wish I could come up with something better to say, it deserves it...

Cool!

I'll admit, I only started reading this because you reviewed my story...and I am glad I did. A poetic, well written piece (although I occasionally think you over-used your enter key), it will be going on my favorites. :)

nice. really nice. very believable, too. i can't even begin to think how this could be edited (er - mutated? :P ); you've written about some things that i can only wish had entered my mind. this had a lot of depth and... well, reality, that i won't even dare interfere. quistis not settling down with anyone was a stroke of genius - not to mention originality. _ keep writing!

Wow! All I can say is WOW! OK, well maybe I can say a little more. This is an absolutely awesome fic and you are an absolutely awesome writer! I am such a Quisty-girl, and so I love it when an author can write something and really be true to her. You got into her head and gave her a depth like that very few people can accomplish. This was truly amazing. Great job!

it's good. *whistle appreciatively* it's really good

Nice little POV, I'm curious what you have to add about the space scene and such too.

OMG that was so incredibly realistic! Quistis is an odd character, you portrayed her really well, great job! I think the story is perfect as it is, don't change a THING!

hah, LoL! the choice is...neither! yeah! go quistis, find your own guy! _ outstanding work, as usual, i think you captured quistis perfectly!

Oooo, that was pretty...I thought it was great. :) Keep writing!

Nice take on the game's story from Quistis's POV. I would leave it as it is, for it implies hope for her in the future, as she finally realizes that she is a worthy person. Nice piece, I liked it.

i love it! It's very well written and I like it heaps. Hope you write more soon!