Keep up the good work, Pen. I'll be watching.

Violent explosions and partial nudity? I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.

Cool chapter, I really liked Garnet's character. Plus, nothing beats a reptile in a suit.

But a question: What does Novi Finis means? It sound Latin; does it has something to do with the story?

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Ok, so Henry got sacked...well bummer. And what's that about the Triple Crown Alliance? I take it's an alliance between the royal families of the stink aadvarks, the Redneckistanians and...ummm...I can't think of the third one...

Whoa, the plotline gets darker by the chapter...sweet :D

That guy Decru some shit stole this story

It's official: You completely twisted what was once a simple, innocent kids' show into one of the darkest fanfictions I've ever read...

Kudos to you, my good sir...(or lady)

But now I want to know what's in store for Yin and Suzie...

SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING THIS BEFORE!

*ahem* Anyways, I loved how you mixed Christmas carols and little kids' stories with the dark atmosphere of the story. That was great!

But a question: So far, we've seen the points of view of the heroes. Are they going to be points of view of the villains, too?

Wow. Yang's pretty upset. I really love how you put so much detail into every chapter

They were playing a game called "Giggity Giggity"?...Wow, no comment.

And Yang broke the fourth wall. Just lovely...

Idk if I've read this before (it seems familiar to me) but you are very descriptive and the only thing I really have to say is to watch your dialouge. It can be a little off and I'd even suggest adding in more, not just some phrases here and there and some quotes from the episode. Make it your own.

AMAZING! :) Keep writing, 'cause you're awesome at it!

This one's really good. I love all the detail, how even the less important characters in the series receive an even amount of storytime.

...You really love Digimon, don't you?

I didn't even notice today was Friday the 13! Wow, I'm dumb...

Anyway, nice chapter :)

If there's something I like about this story, it's that it a lot deeper than wat you expect from a show like YYY. PLus, you get to see what characters from the show (even minor characters) are thinking. Nice.

And just to break all the seriousness: DOMINIQUE GOT PWNED!

Well anyways, I got a question: Are Henry, Suzie and Burton OCs of yours, or minor characters I forgot about?

Most of the parents' POV talk about this great war...This is getting more and more interesting!

Wow, this chapter was really dark, it made me sad...but then again, I love dark stories, even if they make me sad...Anyway, good job with writing the Warriors' POV.

Will there be more characters involved? Maybe villains like Carl or Herman or Yuck?