Why I like this fic:

T.K. is one of my favorite characters in Digimon and I love a Takari. Plus the plot is good.

Why I don't like this fic:

No offence, but Justin is too much like a Gary Stu for me.

OMG! AWSOME! I have a question, how did you turn TK so...um i don't know...DARK? I mean tha is un heard of. He's to nice to have an evil counter part but hey, we all have them too. Awsome story. Read some of mine, they rock, i guess but i prefer some of ur stories over mine. LWV13

Good kid real good

I like how you used a GW reference. LONG LIVE WARHAMMER 40K!

Hey, wouldn't Light TK get destroyed too? Putting them back together or something would make more sense, I think... I'm confusing myself, so feel free to ignore me...

Ooh! Gripping... Why the hell am I writing a review when i could be reading the next bit? Roll on the new chappie!

Amazing story so far. I finally fixed the bug in my computer, so here's my chance to review and put this story on my favourites list!

Very good story.

Good job. I enjoyed reading this fic.

it wuz great!

Great story. Man I love a good Takari.

Just out of curiousity do you really need to be evil to want to shoot Davis?

The concept of the balance of good & evil was well-done. "Where there is light, there will always be darkness." That concept was well put-in. Keep it up.

:rolleyes: Boys and video games. Nice supply of ideas, though...

I think I like that dude Justin very much. Onto ch. 4!

(reading ch. two, comes to the spray paint part, turns red and sets glass down on table) There is not a lot of fics out there that can make me do that. When I consintrate, or am enjoying something, I take my glasses off so I have no distractions. There is only one other fic on this site that makes me to that. Congradulations, oh Master of the Art.

New kid with aditude. Me like. Plus, he doesn't like Davis. You're my kinda dude.

(Finishes ch. 1)

That is a freak accident. Me like. Me keep reading...