This chapter is hot! Smoking hot and so much fun to read. I mean what’s better than Lindsay taking control, teasing and seducing Danny at a lonely beach, huh? Exactly, nothing! I know I said to a few time already but it’s so nice to see this wild and kinky side of Lindsay every now and then. When people first see her they always think she’s a sweet, little country girl, but in fact she’s anything else but that. I mean seducing Danny at the beach where everyone could see them, is not something a sweet, little country girl would do, is it? But let’s start at the beginning…
First of all I would love to know who told Lindsay about this secret beach and why. I mean did she went to the hotel staff and asked them if they know a place where she can seduce her man? Surely not… Anyway, that Lindsay is excited and nervous at the same time is normal I think, after all having sex at the beach is that something you do every day. Plus it’s also forbidden, naughty and smoking hot. I mean the fact that they could get caught makes this whole situation even more exciting. LOL. I love that Lindsay planed all this for Danny, she wants to makes sure that she and Danny have a nice memory of their vacation once they are back in New York. And I knew from the very first moment that Danny would love her surprise, he will be speechless. I think the moment where he sees her in her new, tiny, sexy and white bikini his brain will stop working properly. Right now Danny has no idea what Lindsay has planned for him, but I think as soon as he sees her standing at the beach in this hot bikini he knows that she has something planned. “Montana, could you have found an even lonelier beach?” he wanted to know as he finally arrived. Winking at him, she signaled him to sit down with her hand. “I thought you and I deserve some private time. The beach at the hotel is way too crowded.”-“Oh, definitely.” With a deep sigh, Danny sat down. “I'm getting tired of all those guys staring at my beautiful girl. You're mine, they should get themselves another one.” He stopped, allowing himself a moment to let his eyes roam over her body. “Wow, I didn't know about this bikini.” Sitting up ever so slowly, Lindsay grinned back at him. She hadn't missed how he kept on taking in every of her movements. She and Danny were together for just a few months by now. The tension between them was stronger than ever. Since this special night on their pool table, they couldn't get enough of each other. They had found out how perfectly they fitted together, and how wonderful they could make each other feel. They wanted more. Much more. And she could feel what a hard time he had with keeping his hands to himself as he watched her in this white bikini that created a beautiful contrast to her suntanned skin, and emphasized her female curves perfectly. “I bought it yesterday,” she answered, offering a sweet smile. “I was hoping you'd like it.”-“Like? I love it,”
I didn’t expect anything else from Danny. LOL But then again, Lindsay looks always beautiful and sexy, no matter what she’s wearing. The bikini just helps to speed up Lindsay plan. D I mean Danny can’t look away and simply continues to stare at her, he can’t think about anything else. But Danny isn’t the only one who has problems with thinking about anything else than some hot little number on the beach, Lindsay also has some problems. Danny is just too hot, the way the water pearls on his muscular body is almost too much for her to handle, she definitely has a hard time keeping her cool and sticking to her plan. It even seems to be harder for her than for him to stay cool. LOL But the moment where Danny sees her all wet, wearing her new and see-through bikini, Danny loses it completely. And Lindsay taking off her bikini to let it dry isn’t too helpful as well; she obviously wants to kill Danny just by teasing him. LOL “What are you doing?”-“I think I should let it dry. Over there, in the sun,” Lindsay answered simply. “Imagine I'd have to go back with a see-through bikini.” Danny gulped again. “You wouldn't dare. But...you can't just...”-“No one's here, right?” Lindsay replied, once again in her sweet, innocent voice. “No one will see me. Since when are you so shy?”-“I'm not shy. Just don't want any idiot to stare at my girl,”
Oh, you have no idea how much I love this protective and also jealous side of Danny; I simply can’t get enough of it. For me it’s just freaking hot when he acts like that, it only shows once again how much he loves Lindsay. Just the thought of other guys staring at his Montana drives him crazy. Thankfully he has no time to be jealous for too long, when Lindsay takes off her bikini his brain doesn’t function anymore, all he can do is to stare at her. Of course Danny soon realizes that Lindsay has planned it all. And what can I say? I agree with Danny, Lindsay is a very, very naughty girl. “Told you you're a naughty girl,” Danny answered with a grin. Instinctively, he reached out to touch her, but Lindsay had been prepared for that. Quickly, she grabbed his wrists and pinned them into the blanket by his sides. “No touching,” she ordered. “No touching?” His eyes widened. “Are you kidding me?”-“You touch me and you can take care of what's growing in your pants by yourself,” she told him.-“Whoa, Montana.”
Yeah, Whoa Montana! She really is a naughty woman. D But I love to see this side of her, it’s always a nice change. When you see Lindsay you could think she’s a sweet and innocent woman, but in fact she’s everything but that. She enjoys teasing Danny a lot and loves to drive him crazy with her actions. The way he touches and kisses Danny, so slow and gentle, is too much for him to handle. I really don’ know what else to say, the whole scene is just perfect. The way Lindsay seduces Danny and makes him lose control is amazing and so much fun to read. Excellent job hon! Danny though can’t take her ministrations any longer; Lindsay’s ministrations are killing him. “You can't just stop!” he hissed at her. “I...was so close!”-“You're not the only one,” she told him softly, once again straddling his lap. “Do you have any idea how much I want you?” She lowered herself, allowing only the tip of his erection to brush against her wet center. “Then why all the teasing?” he couldn't help but ask. “Because I want to make you come so hard that you won't ever forget this moment,”
Holy Moly, that’s probably the hottest thing I’ve ever heard Lindsay say. I love when she talks dirty and drives Danny crazy with it. I mean look at Danny he can barley control himself, all her teasing is driving him wild. I don’t know what else to say the whole scene it smoking hot, I love it. The passion and longing between them is so much fun to watch, but as always you can also see the strong connection between them, it’s all about love. And of course Danny would find out that Lindsay planned this whole thing, after all he knows Lindsay inside and out. “I knew you planned this,” Danny said then as they had lain down next to each other, gazing at each other. Gently, he ran a hand through her soft, still wet hair. “Was it a good idea?” Lindsay couldn't help but ask. Danny chuckled. “Are you kidding me? That was the hottest damn idea you ever got.” He captured her lips in a soft kiss. “You're such a sexy woman, you know that? I never thought I'd want someone so much.” Lindsay blushed lightly at his words, knowing he meant everything the way he said it. “Maybe I should make more plans like that then.”-“You should.” He kissed her again. “But now it's my turn.”
Woohoo! That sounds like there should be another chapter for this fic. I would love to see what Danny can come up with to surprise Lindsay, but I’m sure it will be just as hot as Lindsay’s surprise. So please tell me you’ll write another chapter for this fic!
Oh you! You know how much I love this story... what a treat to see it updated again!
I love that Lindsay wants to seduce Danny. And that she's really thought out a plan. And of course it goes without a hitch - Danny is putty in her hands! Great job. Thanks for sharing this hot, steamy story with us!
I honestly don't know what to say other than HAWT FREAKING HAWT DAMN, WOMAN! I don't know what has come over you but I WANT MORE! You, you, you have definitely won us with this smut, so don't say that you can't write it anymore. This obviously speaks for itself in its hawtness!
Funniest moment EVER "You touch me and you can take care of what's growing in your pants by yourself," she told him." I was laughing my butt off with that line, I would say poor Danny...but I love it when Lindsay takes charge like that. :D
As for the sexy and romantic moment, it had to be this "Is everything alright?" she asked innocently as she made her way across the beach. The sun was slowly setting behind her, colouring their skins in a soft, golden tone. She couldn't have chosen a better moment." I could picture that moment so clearly in my mind.
This was freaking awesome, my friend. Not only was this romantic and touching but the way their desire ran through them 'like burning waves' was a great analogy to tie this all together! If I may suggest another chapter? DL making love in a fountain!
OMG! You have no idea how freaking HOT this oneshot is! I LOVE IT!
I mean, what's hotter than jealous Danny? I love it when he goes all caveman and 'Lindsay is all mine' *drools* He's so sexy when he is pissed at other men for staring at Lindsay.
The scene in the garden was just WOW - it's perfect. Love it when Lindsay gets totally worked up about Danny being jealous. And Danny is right "You're hot when you're pissed," - "And even more when you're pissed and wet." LOL. And their love-making was just incredible HAWT. I mean outside in the garden while it's raining against a tree...*starts drooling again, sorry!* I like it that it's not sweet, gentle and romatic, but fast, wild and steamy ;) It's like Danny and Lindsay want to prove that they belong to each other and nobody else can make them feel this way.
Absolutely amazing job once more. You rock, you really do! I hope you'll post another oneshot for this series soon. Please! I can't get enough of it. And while I'm waiting, I'm going to take a cold shower, because I'm all hot and bothered now ;)
Holy Mother of God! THAT WAS SO HAWT! I would say you did a bad bad thing in holding out on us with that but thank you for finally posting it! What I love in here, besides the smut so hot that it steams off my screen, is that you have Lindsay not provoking him into this jealous fits. I LOVE that! But I do understand where she is coming from, she is nice and won't stop being who she is because he has a problem with how it is interpreted.
Danny all glorious and wet in there back yard...I'm surprised that Lindsay took that long in 'shutting him up.' God, to kiss that smirk off his face and stop those comments...*drools.* The fury and storm of their lovemaking was AWESOME! I really hope there are more to come with Hot Water!
Favorite lines
"She would never play with his jealousy. She couldn't deny he was sexy when he got mad, which was just one of the reasons why the two of them wouldn't stop their teasing, no matter how long they were together already. But never she would try to get him jealous, knowing how burning hot that emotion could make one feel; she had experienced it more than often enough when those women had almost doubled over at the sight of her husband, and had even dared to get extra close to him, either to piss her off or because they really thought they had a chance.
But no matter what she tried, those jealousy moments were waiting and would hit them when she didn't expect it. And they happened often. It wasn't her fault she was a polite person, always willing to offer help or at least a friendly smile. Behaviour that could be misinterpreted by others. And especially by him.
The worst was she didn't even notice it. She didn't notice when a man was staring at her with whatever thoughts in mind that caused her husband's blood to boil. She didn't notice how they stared down her cleavage, how they grinned at her ass and legs, how they gave her those certain looks when she was nothing else but either doing her job, trying to get a statement or while being friendly to a person she didn't know."
"Lindsay looked at him in disbelief. "Are you kidding me? Do you need me to polish your ego with telling you how many times all those girls stare at you like you're the newest fashion on the market? Don't tell me you don't see that! What am I supposed to do, huh? Don't you think I don't like that either? What do you think how I'm feeling, especially with knowing that a few years ago, you clearly enjoyed being looked at like that! You've been the player in the past. If someone would have a reason to feel bad because of being scared you could realise that someone else is better than me, it's me! I never gave you any indication that you have anything to worry about!"
"Staring back at him, Lindsay noticed how despite everything she had expected, a smirk lit Danny's face. She looked at him in pure disbelief. "Would you please tell me what's funny now?" she hissed, still in anger.
"You're hot when you're pissed," he told her with a low chuckle that despite her anger sent a shiver down her back. "And even more when you're pissed and wet."
"You're kidding me here, aren't you?" she asked, shaking her head. "You...just got me to the point where I'm more than willing to rip your head off because of what a stubborn, jealous man you are and then you grin at me and tell me I'm hot?" She noticed how he stepped closer as his smirk widened, and once again she caught herself having mixed feelings towards him again. Still she was angry at his unnecessary outburst and the release of her own thoughts. Next to that she could feel it though, the effect he had on her whenever he gave her that smirk. He was right she was wet, but not only by the rain. And freezing she wasn't either as the heat that was rising inside her almost made her forgot about the rainy night."
"I've to admit it was a bit childish," he replied, his voice so low again that it was sending constant shivers through her body. "But I hate that, okay? I hate them looking at you. Even though I can't blame them on it, but I hate it anyways."
"You know I don't care for them at all," Lindsay answered. She was whispering herself now. She knew he was aware of what he was doing to her. Just like she knew how aroused he was himself at that point. The evidence he could see when she just threw a short glance downwards.
"You know I'd not go back to my player times if one paid me for that," he whispered back. "Because it's my wife I want. My hot, wet, pissed wife."
"Oh, shut up already," she hissed at him which only earned her a chuckle in response.
"Make me shut up," he told her boldly.
And making him shut up was what she did. Grabbing the front of his wet shirt, she pulled him flush against her body. His lips crashed down onto hers as his hands instinctively came to rest on her hips. Lost in the heat of the kiss, she barely noticed how he lifted her up. Immediately she wrapped her legs around his waist, not caring that he carried her back into the garden. Involuntarily she released a moan against his lips as she felt herself being pressed against one of the maple trees with her back."
Oh my God. You have no idea - NO FREAKING IDEA - how excited I was to see an update for this series of oneshots. So hot, so steamy. I mean, come on! Who doesn't love angry, jealous, Danny? So sexy and possessive! And to top it off, Lindsay gets herself all worked up and shows a little bit of her fiery temper and jealousy as well. Woot woot!
Love it! I especially loved how they reassured one another that despite the appreciative and inviting looks they may get from others, they only have eyes for one another. Aw!
I wasn't expecting this and it was such a pleasant surprise! :D
This was fantastic... I want a wet, jealous, moody Danny! haha!
It is currently 2 A.M. and I leave for vacation in t-minus 5 hours... is my packing done? Nope. Have I read a reviewed the latest chapter of Hot Water? Yep!
So good. So incredibly good. Brina, you have taken this series so much farther than I ever could have. Thank you so much for taking this on! I loved every single oneshot! :D
I love this chapter! I like that Lindsay has some really naughty ideas herself :)Good to see what Lindsay can do to Danny. He even gets turned on by her swimming in the pool :)
Damn, I could picture all of that perfectly! From her swimming to her glittering body above him. Everything in here has been erotic and so HAWT! Yes, she does like making Danny lose control, but then I adore it when you put them in these situations. :)
My favorite non-smut part...was where he went from half-asleep to alert in less than a second. It really takes something special to get is attention, doesn't it? XD
Favorite lines "She wasn't this kind of a woman who revealed that she had a sex life and like to enjoy it to the fullest. Some people would even think she was kinda shy, possibly even hesitant with some sexual practices. Only the man who managed to earn her trust got to see that there was more under the surface. A side which Danny somewhere along the line seemed to have gotten addicted to."
M... yummy! Now everytime I see a waterfall I'm sure I will think of this and then my mind won't be available to take in the scenery. No, it will be hangin' out in the gutter! Lol. Great job Brina!
Again an awesome chapter :) I love how Danny can make Lindsay losen up. She turns from being a little shy into a frisky and naughty person ;) It's great to see both sides of her.
But it's also nice to know what Linds can do to Danny...
I'm excited to see what else you've planned for them :)
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