I really like this story. Are you going to finish it?

Is there more to this. Please continue. This is actually a more realistic version than the cartoon if you think about it. I mean why would Martians speak English, beyond learning some in the Mind Walk between Throttle and Charlie. And I imagine not much language would pass, but Charlie could pick up some Martian at the same time too.

Anyway this is a really good story and I would like to continue reading it.

Brilliant! I love it. I hope you're going to continue it.

That sounds really good. please continue!

Great work! Is that the end? Interesting breakfast she gave them.

I really like this and I realize that you wrote it exactly four years ago but I would really LOVE to see it continued.

Will you please write a follow up of this version of the BMFM? This is a really good story and I would like to read more about what happens next with these loveable furballs and Charley. Its kinda cute when the guys get confused by Earth technology. Please write soon.

Thanks.

Will you please write some more to go with New Origins? I like the story, and would like to read more about thier adventures in this story. You have the makings of a good epic so please keep writing.

Thanks.

I like the story. Please keep on writing. what will happen next I can hardly wait to find out. I really like the art that goes with the syory.

PS. Do you know where bookworm is? I'm sorry to bother you by asking, but I can't find bookworm anywhere. I saw some art work that you did that was inspired by bookworm's fics and would like to read the story behind such incredable work.

Thanks.

This story was so good. I enjoyed it alot and hope you continue. I'm so glad there is still bmfm fanfic being sent in. I also enjoy your other stories. This was such an interesting ,

Cindy

I just received my answer. Yes there are subtle changes. I like them. Can't wait for the next few chapters!

Your fan

Nova S.

Great! You've posted this one here too. You also changed/added a few things. Are the rest of the chapters like that as well?

I'll guess I'll just read to find out! ;)

Your fan,

Nova S.

Now that's one of the cooler things I've read so far :) I still have minor issues with your tense and I thought some things were a little rushed but you can ignore me :P I liked the entire concept of them not automatically understanding English (of course it seems a little more natural that way :) and it was cute how they were all mischevious and made Charley break 20 blocks worth of windows screaming or whatever it was *sniggers* cute :)

Well commended all the way round.

Sounds good... But one thing is a bit unclear to me: Goldie... like in Goldenfur?