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| The Copper Arabian 2008-07-06 ch 15, | abuseFantastic job on this, I like it so much, and I desperately hope his dreams don't come true :( Thanks for this story :) |
| PapaMidNite 2008-06-05 ch 15, | abusegreat story pm |
| Alien Roxi 2008-04-23 ch 15, anon. | abuseWoo, this left me feeling uneasy. I'll have to get started on Force Bond 4 tomorrow! |
| Alien Roxi 2008-04-15 ch 9, anon. | abuseMarking my spot again! |
| Alien Roxi 2008-04-14 ch 7, | abuseMarking my spot! |
| TheRealThing 2008-04-10 ch 15, | abuseWOW!! how could you end it like that? luckily there are more to read in the series or i would be very grumpy right now wonderful story! |
| please 2007-10-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseon the website on your profile there is a story that is not on fanfiction, the camping one. can u put it plz put it on fanfiction. |
| Aximilli2 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseCool. Now update, or I may just have to torture you! |
| Malabud 2007-07-19 ch 14, | abuseI decided to do a reread of your Force Bond series, and I am finding I am enjoying it just as much as I did the first time I read it. Excellent stories, as always. Your characterization of Vader and Luke is marvelous, and the stories just suck me in. I cannot tell you how much I enjoy this series, and it's wonderful that you've gone back and rewritten and added large sections to them. Your changes only add to the stories and make them better. I am sure I speak for many readers when I say that if you want to do another Force Bond story (such as Accidents, Social Trials, etc.), we would love to read it. Anyway, I noticed that you made changes to this story (Force Bond 3) fairly recently. However, I think you may have accidentally deleted something you didn't mean to delete. In chapter 14, Luke finds Anakin's love letters to Padme in a Jedi book, and he also makes reference to a "stupid ghost" who made a cryptic reference about the book. But, there was no ghost prior to this, and this is the first time we hear about the book. So, I think you might have mistakenly deleted the scene in which Obi-Wan appears and recommends that Luke read a particular book. Otherwise it doesn't make sense. Just FYI. Keep up the great writing! |
| Barranca 2007-06-30 ch 15, | abuseThe more I see of Luke and Vader the more ironic it is how the history repeats itself. I feel bad for Vader, but he really needed that wake up call. The guy needs to stop stepping farther and farther from the right path just because "it's the only way". |
| Barranca 2007-06-30 ch 9, | abuseIt's just unimaginable how Vader, who was so hard pressed to listen to the authority during his time in the Jedi Order, takes it from the Emperor on regular basis. Maybe the only reason why this is possible is what Lucas said - he considers the Emperor his friend. But now that there is no loyalty in him to Palpatine any longer, I hope to see how he takes the latter down. A notch or two :P |
| Barranca 2007-06-30 ch 7, | abuseLuke really is young and oblivious isn't he? I guess he believes himself be all knowing and indestructible like all young people. I hope he will learn from his experiences and dreams. |
| Code name: Anrui Yuy 2007-04-21 ch 15, | abuseI read this series last summer and loved it, but was always with my first read through I tend to skip paragraphs or lines to get to the exciting parts, so as I've re-read through it recently I've found myself laughing my ** off at all the little clever jokes you have in there :bows: my hat off to you, you're not only a great author you are more clever then...well really any other author I've found on here. Really love your stuff. |
| Afaim 2007-03-18 ch 15, | abuseHi again, The third part seems to be extremly tough, but really well written. There is much going on and I think it's the longest part. I was afraid that Luke would leave at the end because he thinks he has to and alas so he did. Which of course let the reader wonder what will happend next and made me start the fourth part as soon as I was finished with it. I rather enjoyed the introduction of Leia, Han and Chewie in this one. And good old Palpy (may he rott forever!!) proved to be not just ugly but really mean and evil. By the way: Old corpse? I just love that! It's rather fitting. |
| =( 2007-03-17 ch 15, anon. | abuseOh God! This fic has made me cry and not even any of the SW movies did that to me! That's horrible! I hate the Emperor! I'd choke him myself after I kick him in the groin if I could! Poor Vader! Poor Luke! |