I luv d story. Its so well written n has such a nice plot. I like dat u gave a sorta happy endin for d weasleys but kept ron away frm d potters. Never liked him:p

Outstanding story-Firsties kickin dumbledork's ass gotta love it...

Molly Weasley's portrayal in this fic is utterly hilarious. She's literally unrecognizable as canon Molly Weasley. Had you swapped her name, I would not have noticed, honestly.

great fic!

No matter how many times I read this its still GREAT! Its also great to read while I am eagerly waiting for a concluding chapter of another story!I would love to have a sequel to this!Thank you for writing this story!

I have to say I love your stories. I'm currently re-reading this one again. Great job :D

As much as I dislike Ron turning him into Ronda is poetic justice death would have been too easy.

This is an absolutely fantastic story. I like how you handled Umbitch and are handling Dumbledork and the Weasleys.

I LOVED this story and I can't wait to read your others. Keep up the great work. :-)

I did enjoy this story in the beginning, but towards the end I did not. It was too rushed. Too "omgharryisthebestintheworld"

Also 99% of the characters were o/c. Surely the couldn't chang the world that much?

I love this story!

Great job on an overused plot! I liked how much Harry and Hermione changed everything so much for the better. If only the real world was that easy... But still, an amazing story with great writing and a new twist on a much overused plot! And a perfect happy ending- except for the fact that there were no more chapters to look forward to reading. :)

Great job so far! I love this new side to Professor McGonagall! Hermione kicks ass too this time around not only with magic but also of course her knowledge and now has a way with words. (Harry does too but there are far more fics about an awesome Harry than Hermione.) I thought it was great that Ginny idolizes Hermione for being independent, strong, intelligent, skilled, and powerful instead of the canon hero-worship/crush on Harry Potter the Boy-Who-Lived. Definitely is still, well, Luna, although she seems happier and isn't going on about nargles or something s much as usual.I'm glad Sirius is alive and free and not as haunted and genuinely, completed happy. It's also nice to see everyone get their dues. Harry and Hermione are definitely changing the timeline and the magical world more than I thought possible with what I'd consider positive outcomes. I'm looking forward to reading the rest so I'll end here!

A very good story overall, i really liked that the mysterious author that dumbledore was looking for is probably himself writing his memoirs from st. mungos

Great story. I'm glad you didn't kill Ron. Ronda was a brilliant solution. The fight in the room of requirement was great too.

Thank you for writing this captivating story,

Beyogi