Ouch, poor Watson. That would have hurt.

Just found this story and really enjoyed reading it. The report/testimonial style was original and led into

the account of the final scene very effectively. Thank you.

Mrs P

Struck by lightning. Ouch.

Nicely done. I've finally gotten around to heading to the library and checking out a couple Sherlock Holmes books.

Keep writing!

A very,very good read. Thank you for sharing.

Enjoyed this a lot. Liked the Wilkie-Collins style extracts, liked the original idea - really great story, thanks!

lightening-struck! I believe you have found a woe Watson has not yet suffered, and congratulations for it!

I like you AU. Not only because of Watson but because it wraps up faster and just as neatly and as excitingly (?) as the original.

And I like the testimonial approach too.