Oh, how cute!

what a sweet story. i loved it, especially how toshiro got a kick out of it.

Gin and Shiro...damn, those two are cute either as a father and son or as brothers. XD

This is briliant...

Loved it! It was very cute! I find it a little strange though that a toddler could injury Toshiro enough to being unable to walk. Even if he was in a faux body. Renji shouldn't laugh at Toshiro, how mean ..., but so in character.

This story is pretty awesome. I've read other stories of yours and there all pretty great. I wish I could write as well as you could :P

Anyway, I also read your profile and your tips were really helpful, and I hope it improves my writing

hey

well done

its a good christmas story

10/10

haylie myers

LOL, cute. Gin bringing Toshiro to see Santa, and then carrying him on his back! _

i love it. so cute. Shiro-chan is so cute even when he not tring to be. and i love his interaction with Gin. damn with your stories i have 180'd my opinion of Gin i just love him now. i love the way you write him. i mean the way you write it makes sense and goes well together. ps. it is mircle on 34th street.

Very sweet. Loved every part of it. You are a true wirter.

This was hilarious. You'd think with as smart as Toshiro is, he'd keep his trap shut when it needs to be shut. His pride will be his undoing one day.

I liked how Yamamoto agreed with Gin's plan of helping Toshiro with getting into the Christmas spirit.