i like this chapter alot but the time increments seem odd but that doesnt really matter other than that i thought it was good

Beautiful. Looking for updates. (There will be updates, right?) Untill next time, bye! :)

are you insane? it was going so good...why end it like that! this is a good/bad comment..lol...keep writing! or i will MAKE it horrible comment next time! ( j/k im not THAT mean)

-me

GAH! MORE! I'm desperate, I NEED to know what happens! *goes on strike until story is continued*

Hey!
Why havent u updated this story? its really good...i liked it alot. quite dark and insightful...great!

I like it so far! I love Snape stories, he's such a tortured soul!

I like it so far! I love Snape stories, he's such a tortured soul!

Great story! Please keep writing it!

Kami-sama! How does everyone writing a Snape fanfic do this to me? Kami-sama! You must continue!

Kami-sama! it happened _AGAIN_...I never particularely LIKED Snape...and yet I read the fanfics about him...and _every_ _single_ _time_ I end up loving him in the story. You made me do it again.

C-chan

As usual, this was good. Post more soon!

Helly, these chapters are getting better and better, please tell me me what happens next!

Please write more soon! I really like this one!

Katana

More, me want more more more. The second chapter is as brilliant as the first and if you keep it up I'll have to kill you coz ur so much better writting stories than me! GO HELEN GO HELEN GO HELEn wooooo!

I really like this story, and the concept! Post more soon!