|Reviews for A Day Out Shopping|
| Sparkling-nexis137 1/13/10 . chapter 1
XD This was such a great story! I absolutely loved it. Zoro's costume was hilarious! And Luffy's was really cute. When Luffy was asking for other medical procedures that he could use besides the heimlich maneuver, I half expected Smoker to show him CPR. XD That would have been so wrong. Anyway, great job on this story. Keep up the great work.
| Rexan 1/1/10 . chapter 1
Yes, Smoker. You sure were 'fooled'. xD
I'm fine with how you did quotes, you know, 'like this?' But the thing about that is that some people show someone's thoughts by doing that. Quotes "like this" tend to work better, but I guess it's really just an opinion thing. Really, though, I just want to say this was a funny fic. x) Nice job! _