I love this fic ! Akane is more calm as usual but in a good way , We can imagine him like this with Hito so easily ...

It was such a nice time between them , what it miss in the manga !

Aaah, what a cute story...so sweet and warm!

I really love your story and writing style, you did a great job!

It's nice to know there are still more Hitonari x Akane fans outside there, but you know what makes me even more happy?

The fact that you made Hitonari the Seme! :)

Though I'm not sure if you really meant it that way, but...

Okay, i mean, it wasn't anything like with them really going at it, but you know what i mean, right? Thank you so much!

Also, the scene you described was written really well, you considered how they would really feel and wrote it perfectly fitting to their characters.

Everything you wrote feels so natural,

i can perfectly imagine it happen, either in the Manga or just in my fantasy...with them doing even more xD *snicker*

Just like Hitonari thought:"We can do so much up here, ranging from something innocent to something not-so-innocent..."

Aaah, how much i wished that they would have continued *longing sigh*

I would be very happy if you would write a sequel or simply another story about their developing relationship,

how they do more, share more, etc... :) *cough cough*

And it was also interesting to see it out of each others personal view.

I don't know what more to write, so just...just do us all a favor and write more with this couple, there are still so less stories with them! (Well, at least with Hitonari being the Seme")

Gooooooooo lonelylittlewolf!

your fan Kamo-chan

PS: Hey, maybe you want to ready my Hitonari x Akane story? It's just one-shot and could be better...but, oh well...i would be very happy if you would write a review But before that, I'll have to warn you, cause my story is M-rated, just to let you know 0.o

Awww...It's very2 cute XD

I like the pairing

Hoping for more stories from you

your english is a little sloppy, but the story and the way you brought it across with the emotion is fantastic!

I promise you that i'll read, right? And to leave a review.

Read about them remind me about high school, when we're crazy with these two stubborn boys.

Sigh.

How i love these two boys.

Ah, well, that's all.

Nice story.

Luv ya! .