great story!

really great dabbles cant wait till u updated

This was more favorite of all the chapters, but they are all great! Very intriguing I just wish there was an 'next' button to click on :[

This is quite good. How long have you been writing? You remind me very much of one of my favorite romance authors, Lora Leigh. You're sentence structure and grammar could use a bit of tweaking, and there were a few typos, but all and all it was written very, very well. I was entertained, and not disgusted, which is very good as far as I'm concerned. You handled this chapter well, with a deep maturity that I don't often see. I've been writing for some years now and I still have to approach romance with a light step, but you've taken it by the horns and ran with it. Maybe in the future I'll be able to pull it off with the same style and fluidity as you do. Good job

I loved this so much. Especially the part when he kept failing for three days. That was so

Yay! An update! And I loved this chapter. I can honestly see myself doing the same thing if I ever came under critique. I just hope that it doesn't lead to a spoiled breakfast.

Man, this was so effing hot! I don't think I'd ever be able to complain about Grimmjow's lovemaking, but I'm SO glad Nel did. XD Awesome drabble and I'm so happy that you updated. Seriously. I've been going insane without some good GrimmNel smut. I can't wait to read the next one! :D

*grins* I loved this so, SO much. When I saw "gentle" Grimmjow, I went BUWAH? 0.o BUT YOU DID IT SO AMAZING AND PERFECTLY AND I LOVE IT AND YOU AND *molests code*

I loved it! It was romantic and yet funny, and very in keeping with Grimmjow's personality. I think that one of these times Neliel is going to have to get her revenge and be dominant. I know she is a masochist, but just to get Grimmjow riled up, she should jump him.

haha. i love grimmy!

chap 3 is tha best one

grimmy is such an ass. lmao.

I love Fridays:3 Amazing, code!

Yep, it's still as hot as when I first read it.*q*

Man, this was freaking hot! *fans self* I love some GrimmNel action, but it's so hard to find some decently written stuff, so I'm so glad that you started this drabble series. :D I can't wait to see the next one!

Definitely hot, the whole idea that they might get caught. But t the same time I felt bad for Neliel that she seemed to be used by Grimmjow (even if she did like it) and that she might get into really big trouble. I couldn't help but feel sorry for her.

GREAT!