Took me two days to finish this... Damn work!

But holy hell!

One of my favorites as of uh NOW!

Please please please write a sequel... I want to know whats up with Ann, how her parent's react, when does Toby come 'home'?

Decided to reread this story today and remembered how much I loved it. I do hope you continue this someday.

Magus or Magnus? Make up your mind.

You're such a good writer (except when you so tiresomely repeat sections from the novelizations...two or three lines, a few times, is fine; giant slabs a zillion times copied is not), I wonder why you don't bother checking your spelling. Especially for an admitted dyslexic. It's "hors d'oeuvres", not "h'orderves". Great jumping goblins, you should be Bogged! I'm not even getting into all the other annoyances...and why on earth do you bold-italicize words that don't remotely need it?

Have you ever even BEEN to Harrods, let alone to a sale there? I assure you, it is even wilder and more frantic on a regular day than any sale in some dumb US mall. And the post-holiday sales are like a cavalry charge. I've had a charge account there for decades, and I know all about it...

Paisley, you MUST continue this tale. I mean it, you have no choice!

Having rely enjoyed this so far, I'm upset to realise it isn't even complete!
It also breaks my heart to see that this is the last of your actual chapter fics, the longer ones at least- no more long stories! :(
I will miss spending hours reading your work, I'll miss it terribly, and I really hope you'll come back to finish this! I will of course read the last few short stories of your work that I haven't read, but I would truly love to see you come back with more!

You've changed the spelling of Anne's name more than halfway through? :S

I really hope you finish this story. It's possibly my favorite to date that you've done.

Please say there's more... ! This can't be the end...

Can't wait for the next chapter Paisley. I love your stories. :)

I do hope you haven't forgotten this story my dear Scribe. I check every once in a while to see if you have updated, and alas, you havent. Please update soon. I really do miss this story very much!

Ahhhhrrrdajajajagrrrmple. - Angrish

I thought this story was complete and for a moment thought this chapter was the last one! XD I have to say I really adore your characterization of Jareth. The fandom seems to tame him far to much usually.

wow great story! im loving it!

are you going to update more or is this it becaue i feel tere should be more...

What an amazing story. I think this might be one of my most favorite stories you've written. I gobbled it down as quickly as possible tonight but was sad to see that it hadn't been completed. I hope you plan on finishing the story. I'd love to see your conclusion. Awesome story.