Lovely and fitting end. Again, thank you! I love your writing and I plan on reading much more.

OK, finally going back to review the "big reveal". I'm one of those readers who just "lets it happen", mindlessly reading along, not trying to figure the story out ahead of time, so I ignored the signs and you totally knocked me on my *ss with this chapter. Ugh, my heart hurts! I've been reading fanfics for a little over 2yrs now, I've seen this story rec'd, especially on the Facebook angst, Twi fanfic groups, soooooo I finally decided to read it and I'm glad I did. Such a wonderful, beautiful, tragic story - I'm on chap 11 now, so I'll give you my final verdict soon :-) again, thank you!

I held on tight for a while until Edward started crying as Bella was dying and that did me in...ugh. What a wonderfully simple, beautiful, and honest marriage proposal. You've truly made me fall in love with these two and Bella's happiness before the accident was absolutely infectious. Thank you so much for your beautiful writing.

The Fictionators - www(dot)fictionators(dot)com/ has featured your story on our site for the week of 4/27/2012.

Thanks, we really appreciate your contribution to the fandom :)

Songster for the Fictionators

I don't think I can say it much better than the last few reviews...but thank you for such a wonderfully written and emotional story. Thank you for capturing our hearts so completely. It was beautifully crafted and well told. You are responsible for my tears today because you moved me to the brink of devistation then filled me with hope. Thank you mostly for sharing this gift in this forum.

Ever devoted-

SME

Wow! I saw your story recommended on fb and wanted to read a chapter or two quickly to decide whether it was for me or not... and here I am, past 2 a.m. finishing the last chappie! I simply couldnt stop reading. At some point I was worried that you were going to leave it as an open ending, but I guess I should have believed Edward right from the start, he promised that he and Bella would be together and of course, he kept it. Thank you :-)

omg I am a sobbing blubbering mess but I am sooo very grateful for this heartwrenchingly beautiful story you guys wrote. I don't think I will ever forget it.

All of it. my mind and my heart is a mess but you captured perfectly their pain and their love and their promise and they were all so fantastic and thank you for the very end.

The only thing I am mad about is that I only read this today. I wish I had read it years ago. I don't even want to press the button submit review because I don't want it to be over.

OMG, what can I say. A friend on Facebook rec'd this & I had to read it. I was warned that I would need a box of tissues. Boy, did I! I have had tears running down my cheeks since chapter 5! This was so beautiful, heart breaking and unimaginably haunting. It did have its light moments- Emmett was good comic relief within all the angst. And, what Alice did at the end for Edward (and Bella) was incredible.

Thanks!

Sally

Gosh

Jesus

How can u write so epically

So perfectly?

I cried when I read this. I rarely ever cry on stories. But I mean it was such a wonderfully writen story and it was sad n beautiful, that how could I not?

Your words touched my heart. Deeply.

I'm sorry this story did not get more reviews. It is beautifully written. I understand some people can't handle angst, but then they miss out on beautiful stories like this one.

I feel like I've been punched in the gut. Egads I can hardly breath. Beautifully written story. Thanks.

So i'm reading this with my morning coffee and bread and i'm crying on a beautiful sunday morning. GREAT JOB. I hope you get more reviews on this one. .

I'm sobbing away and I just can't think of a more heart wrenching story. Well maybe The Notebook... but whatever..

Just... wow.

I loved it and since I am a firm believer in all things to do with fate, destiny and all that hoopla I adored this story.

The fact that she died the same night he proposed... something just happened to me when it clicked.. these big, wracking sobs just came out of me and i was chanting 'omg fuck' like a mental person.

I have no idea how both of youse could think this up let alone write it down. I'm glad you did though, really glad.

Lover of ADF and proud camper! xx

ps - got this from the 'fics that make you bawl' campfire'

so sad but so good!

"Bye, Bell," he whispers and the car starts."

This was the saddest moment for me throughout this story, and that's saying a lot.

The ending was beautiful and bittersweet, but mostly hopeful. I love that time meant nothing anymore to Bella. That means it could've been the next day for her, and since you've left it open-ended, I'll think that.

Anyway, thank you for a beautiful story. I loved every second of it and read every word.