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PageKarasu
2003-05-25 . chapter 1
I love it.

** hilarious.
Windsong
2002-05-31 . chapter 1
*laughs* That was great! ...As well as being one of the shortest stories I have ever read. *sigh* Keep writing!
195353
2002-04-05 . chapter 1
Klonoai: Hahah! Poor Duo!
Kira: Heehee...that would have been funnier if he actually did...you know! Heehee!
Azusa: Did what?
Kira: You KNOW...
Azusa: *annoyed* I really don't.
Kira: Boy, are you dense.
Azusa: I'm not!
Kira: Are too!
Klonoai: Shaddup! Both of you!
Kira: I don't have to do anything you say.
Klonoai: I oughta whap you...
Icka M. Chif
2002-02-11 . chapter 1
Heh heh heh
That was fun! Thanks!
-ICKA! the IMP
Relena Peacecraft
2002-01-31 . chapter 1
that was cute,and kinda funny.^-^
Marshmallow Peep
2002-01-23 . chapter 1
Gijinka D: *giggles maniacally* HEAR ME, GIGGLING MANIACALLY! HE-HE-HE! That rhymes!
Detro-Dray: I hate rhymes.
Gijinka D: *Whaps Detro-Dray in the head* No more beaning him for me, I'm WHAPPING him now! That's a nice word, whap, whap, whap...
Detro-Dray: Whatever.
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