Is it ended there? That's a very unfortunate place to end... And yay, rimming! It's so overlooked in fanfiction, I find. I mean, sure, it happens, but not nearly enough. So that this focused on it made me really happy You're good at writing, too! So if there's more, I'm excited for it. If not, this was great in itself.

Thanks for writing!

Write more or me kills u. YOAI RAPE! ;-3

WAA! Don't put this on hold! I just LOVVVE Lucky Paring! Pleaseeee updateee!

Ummm...ok...wow...ughhh...can't really think of anything coherent to say...update soon :D

Oh wow. This was... wow. That's all I can say. I can't wait to read more, if you update and all that. really, this is quite well written to a point that I'm rather speechless.

Poor Lavi. That's all I can say. w

o.o i want more of this fic! this is good!

this is fantastic!

So don't forget to take it off hold soon!

And by soon i mean NOW!

Does it count if I just submit 10 reviews? I want MORE damnit! Lucky has suddenly become my new fave pairing :D xx

thats was so sexy :3

poor lavi and his ass

but i love it X3

So HOT! :D

mwahahahah!

Sorry, my fangirling tends to turn my reviews into incoherent babble. o.o

SQUEEE!

*speechless as of now*

Yaay I think this might be my second review. Hmm, I'm not sure but I'm reading this again. I like this story alot nice job. I hope you can write more soon.

After back from a d.'gray man hiatus, I have to say ur story is simply amazing. Don't leave us hanging there!

I like this story very much! I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

Me; KYAAAAAAAAAH!

Twisted Brain: Make this fangirl shut up God damn't!

Me: PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASE post an other chapter soon!

Twisted Brain: *knocks the baka out* way better like that. Her and her yaoi addiction.

Me: Yaoi *looks around with blood dripping on her head*!

Twisted Brain: Zombie is more lke it... Well, bye. *drags the baka out*

would it be pervey of me to ask for more?