I really liked this story, but I was wondering if you are going to update soon? Cause its been over a year now...

this is a good story but i strongly disapprove of pairing up Kino and Shizu, it is so unlikely that they would have a deep relationship

Very good start :) Can't wait to read more!

I definitely think you should continue this! I like it so far

Oh, man. Good job keeping the characters in character. I love the way you wrote Riku and Hermes - yes, it's just so them to immediately argue. And throw insults. D

And that bit when Kino was explaining about why she travels and stuff? I can imagine that bit in the books, too.

So yeah. Keep writing, I wanna read more! D

Fine beginning. Putting aside my deductions about Kino's uhm... personal life, she's very firmly in character here.

Beware of homonym confusion: witch/which, to/too, wiped/whipped. That's something spell-checkers can't fix.