I'm sorry if this may offend you, but Altamira is a town in the middle of Rainforest where is very far away from Rio De Janeiro, thosands of miles away! The city's airport is called Tom Jobim International Airport, or for domestic flights is used the Santos Dummond Airport.

Amazing!

This was done perfectly, I believe it to be absolutely spot-on with what Edward would have been thinking after that heart-shattering phone call. You wrote his despair perfectly.

brilliant!

I think you came pretty close. That was really good, in an angsty sort of way. honestly though I thought this was awsome. your awsome for writing it!

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Thanks even if you cant be bothered. loved the story!

I think you did agood job displaying edwards feeling for good friend Sarah asked me to read this poetic piece. I think the way you portrayed his feeling when he was told that bella had died was excelent. You should become some type of professional writer or something in that and Sarah tells you to keep up the good work.

Wow... That was... can I say wow again? I loved the use of quotes from the books! I think it's different reading her words in Edward's POV that reading her words from her POV, if that makes sense? Anyway, nice!

Great! beautifully done - thank you for sharing!

Wow. This was intense! Favorite line by far -

"Because, love never really did save me from anything. Not even myself.

It really was poetic-in a twisted way."

You did a wonderful job!