why are the Dursleys cowering? I thought harry pretended it was a wrong number? and how did they not know when he said "Okay, I'll see you tomorrow at noon then, thanks, these Dursley's are terrible. Bye". Why is he still worried about being beaten if he knows martial arts and wandless magic?

he watched a few martial arts classes and now he can do martial arts? he can do wandless transfiguration?

Nice story!

Q: Is harry Just going to live as a phoenix until 1995?

and it sIr XXX, not sEr... just trying to be helpful :)

I have read a second chance at life, awesome story man! (or woman)

I hope you never stop writing this!... oh wait, you did ):

nevermind...

Also, the only other mistake i noticed, and it doesn't happen often, but you dod do it a few times, you add the last letter of a word to the start of the next...

eg: Me: I'm going to the XXX

You: I'm goin gto the XXX

Besides that, this story is perfect :) Good work!

C ya,

cat eats fish, grinns

Hi

What make of car does harry have and how is it playing up

and what are beats and why would spell not make it flinch

you really need a bata

not a bad story really, keep it up

Ill continue to read the story, but it seems a little scattered. I mean Hermione saying something along the lines of it would be cool to be able to beat Malfoy up seems a little OOC and immature. I will continue to read to see if the story improves.

-Michael D

I realize that this was probably one of your first fanfics, but Harry's abilities would have been much more believable if you had explained how he came by them - and watching a few martial arts classes doesn't even come close.

Great story. When are Harry's girlfriend and soul brother going to return?

What about the stuff that was worked out for Godric and Cleatris to be able to join him in his time?

thought this story was going to be good but you fucked it up, no offense or anything (sarcasm if you didnt notice)

tips for improvement: delete the story dumbass.

I don't think you should trouble yourself with explaining the details of High K'haril. I won't read it myself if it is just a dictionary.

I like what you've written so far so good job.

Harry isn't too powerful so that's good. But what about his soul brother? I had the impression that he had no intention of leavin them in the past? Maybe Harry will go back to the past as a different founder? It would be kind of ironic if he would be slytherin?

this story is written well thanks for continuing with your writings. good job

wait. is this like Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix . i mean the one you wrote?

Great Story

he ygreat fic but i was just wondering where all the stuff Harry's carrying cames from? like fire vine juice and stuff, I thought he only had his wand?

love the plot! Big mistake with the ten thousand year thing... JKR canon has Godric and the four Founders of Hogwarts living ONE thousand years prior to the first book. Youv'e placed Griffyndor at 8,0 B.C.! Until you made that change I was able to overlook the numerous historical innacuracies for the sake of "suspension of disbelief". Now it's really difficult to overlook there were no prtinted books, domesticated horses, steel for swords or knives, or any of the inventions since 10 A.D. in 8,0 B.C.