poetic... well written.

I love Alice...

Ah ha! interesting twist! nicely done. :)

Really loved this. Immediately thought of LVP's Bound when reading it. Love what you captured here.

Sneaky way to insinuate...something. I love seeing people play with canon POVs other than Bella and Edward b/c it makes you wonder if they REALLY could have been thinking something like that, as well as what Edward heard and didn't hear. And the magnitude of things he kept bottled up and private for the sake of the person thinking them. Well done.

wow, very powerful little piece! I really liked it!

interesting...

oh...love this! Well done, bb

I get it. I like it.

HOLY... WOW.

you just. wow.

i love wehn writers, especially GOOD ones, really explore E's bloodlust beyond the "i vant to drink your blood" bela lugosi business.

outstanding.

Jasper wanting Bella's blood and her body too? What's a poor vamp to do?

This reminds me a little of "Innocence is Dripping Red" by EchoesOfTwilight (which I beta). Your super-short fics are fantastic because they make my mind start imagining the continuation or what came before. (I can't wait til the next round when I can try my hand at this Twi25 thing!)

OH YAY.

THIS ONE I CAN GET BEHIND.

ungh. jasper was hot for thinking those things and then edward was even kind of hot for getting all riled up.

this was awesome - it came out of you so quick too. the part in eclipse where jasper tells bella his story is one of my faves.

great job!

We just won't tell anyone what kind of reward I wanted for Edward. And Jasper. I need help.

I'm still so impressed with how much you can convey with so few words; the images and emotions conjured by a few words and a few ellipses in this one are both creepy and hot.

Thank you for writing.

Oh man, I LOVE this.

I feel like I should be more eloquent, but my brain is not functioning at full capacity today.

I just saw the rating...I'm cracking up at "M-ish"...

And I like how it fits in with LVP's Bound...a lot.

I think, honestly, it's harder to do these drabbles than a one-shot, but you always convey so much in so few words. I think I've probably said that before, but I think it every time I read one of your drabbles.

Awesome )