This was so beautiful and a quite a bit heartbreaking! I really, absolutely loved it! Great job and thank you for sharing. ]

I wonder what kept him from dinner that night. I like this Edward and Bella to. To a certain extent. In real life, he'd probably piss me off :P.

I liked it.

Maybe I'm stupid and missed it,

but why'd he stand her up?

i hope they do show up again :) i loved the story

i loved this story so much . the rawness of it just shocked me . great and i hope to see more of this couple in the future

this was seriously amazing, Ive got goosebumps...thank you

o I love this! its was great!

nice, very nice. intense but very real. I like it a lot

So, so, sweet. I'd really like to see more of them. Thanks for writing!

The awkwardness,the longing, the silence, the words even the title, everything in this story is well proportionned. Usually when I read a fanfiction I'm greatly disappointed by the fact that the relation between Edward and Bella are not deep enough and always, always are the result of a matchmaking... Yours is outstandingly independant in that regard and the emotions are not overly described.

All in all, it's just perfect. Thank you so much for sharing your talent on fanfiction and I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

LaFleurOrange

i like it ;)

u should write more

Wonderful. Will be recc'ing on my blog nest week.

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YES WE LOVE IT, WONDERFUL

You know what, this doesn't make any sense, but I think I love YOU! Oh my god, that is the BEST Edward and Bella story I have read, EVER. Pwease bring them out again? I'll love you FOREVER AND EVER!

-Jesse 3

That was so adorably cute. Finally, after reading way too many bad stories on this website I find one which is worth reviewing. One of the best one-shots i have ever read, simply because i can relate so easily.

I would absolutely love to see more of this Edward and Bella. I mean who doesn't love a tortured artist Edward. He's hot. Hope you write more. Thanks for brightening up my terribly terrible day.

xx