Very strong piece. Well written, intense, and in character.

You completely nailed their relationship! Fab job, I loved it :)

Wonderfully done.

Great story! Love the dialogue and the way you describe things! Hope you'll write more Tony/ Carol.

Unbelievably good. The way you write Tony.

Loved every word thank you.

AMEN! to everything coolbyrne said! I would love to read more WITB-fics from you.

Amazingly well done! Perfect characterization and fine writing.

Somehow I missed this story! Great characterization and a really enjoyable flow; a pleasure to read. I hope you'll continue to write more- this fandom could benefit from qualities stories like this. Thanks for writing it.

This was fantastic. Just brilliant. The sexual tension and both Carol and Tony's hesitance is spot-on. I've favourited.

Is there any chance of a sequel?

Yeah, I'm late with my review, just wanna say you wrote a great story, it was a real pleasure to read it!

I am just sitting at work wading through a stack of student psyc evaluations and desperately needed a break and a chance to delve into some more interesting psychology and I thought of this story. I have already read this and passed it along to several friends who love the show. Its just so well written and beautifully plotted. I hope that you do something with writing in your day to day life because you should definitely get paid for coming up with this stuff. Thanks for the much needed break and dose of aberrant psychology with just a dash of true love.

Perfect and in-character. I liked the way you set up the situation too with just the right amount of tension to pull you through and feel the situation without it being overwhelming or too obvious. A

I absolutely loved this story! I have just recently discovered this wonderful series and was thrilled to discover that there was fanfiction about these characters. I think you totally nailed both of the characters and the tenuous, promising nature of their interactions. Is "Beneath the Bleeding" one of the books? So far I have only been able to find the TV series but I am on the hunt for the books. You are a beautiful writer and I loved this story. It was twisted, romantic and sweet in equal measure just as Tony and Carol so often are. I would love to read more WITB fics by you. Thanks for taking the time to write this.

Just... wow. Your characterisation is absolutely spot on - if I didn't know better I could almost believe that Val M wrote this! Congratulations on a fabulous story.

Wonderful! Just wonderful ;)