I hope you update soon! :-)

This story is Awesometacular! :-)

Is it possible that you can Pinocchio being a little bit bad that the Blue Fariy turns him back into a puppet and that he must tries to show her that he can a good boy for real. And for a funny idea, Pinocchio returns to school as a puppet and his friends are surprised. He tries to lie his way out of it but nose grows long and all of the other kids starts laughing at him.

Oh dear! This certainly is a fine pickle to be in. I hope Jiminy and Melissa hurry back with help and clear up this whole thing. Oh and Eugene is a little stinker. Keep up the good work.

Holy crap you finally updated! This is really great and I hope they get Pinocchio out of jail.

I'm very sorry I did not get back to you sooner when you had noted me on DA. I've just been very busy. I would love to beta-read your story for you! It's my pleasure to give critique and advice, and of course, tell you how much I am enjoying this fic! :)

I really loved this chapter! Poor Pinoke! He never goes looking for trouble, but trouble always seems to find him!

Just one thing that kinda stands out- Annabella telling Jiminy that he is "talking out of his ass". That sort of slang is far, FAR too modern for the time-period, and just doesn't fit at all. Perhaps she could have just said "Once again, you don't know what you're talking about." Also, and to a slightly minor extent, I realize that Annabella is no push-over, but it still seems very unlady-like and improper for a woman of that time to use such language.

That story is pretty funny. It made me laugh as I read it. But it's pretty cool, too!

Listen to me, you don't know me, but you have to listen to me. It's a matter of life or death. Do not under, any circumstances, pair Melissa with Jiminy. It would be a disaster. And wrong. Just plain wrong. Also I like your story. Are you planning of having Melissa turning back to human anytime soon? Cause I kinda want to see want she can do as a human.

I like Melissa's character, particularly when she says that Pinocchio is too young to see this. Did you purposely apply double meaning to the lyrics? I thought they were hilarious. I love the relationship between Jiminy and Melissa and if someone else wrote the story, their first instinct was to make it a Jiminy/OC pairing.

i am in love with this story! please update soon:)

What a wonderful chapter! Well worth the wait! I'm glad you made it very realistic, in the sense that Pinoke was having trouble learning the alphabet on his very first day. However, I do think you should've had Jiminy lecture him for hitting Eugene. They did sorta scold him, and Pinoke was quick to realize that he shouldn't have done that, but I still think it would've been better if the crickets emphasize that violence is never the answer, that it can only lead to trouble.

I LOVE the idea of giving the crickets a dollhouse! That's just perfect! Why didn't I think of that for my JC fics? You also put a lot of detail in it!

Ohh, I can't wait for more! You do an excellent job of keeping everybody in-character, and the new characters are very interesting. I'm guessing Pinocchio is going to have a crush on that girl, hey?

Great chapter. Lots of things happening.

That was really good. I hope the rest turns out good. I love the house, it sounds adorable. I also like the fact that Melissa mentions that she needed to use the bathroom.

Please, PLEASE don't tell me you've given up on this story! You haven't updated all summer! *cries*

The scene with Jiminy looking at the french puppets was hilarious.

great orignal chapter, Kodos on adding the deleted scene from pinocchio