|Reviews for Two Crickets, Twice The Luck|
| BestCrossoverMovies 12/14/12 . chapter 5
I hope you update soon! :-)
| BestCrossoverMovies 12/14/12 . chapter 10
This story is Awesometacular! :-)
Is it possible that you can Pinocchio being a little bit bad that the Blue Fariy turns him back into a puppet and that he must tries to show her that he can a good boy for real. And for a funny idea, Pinocchio returns to school as a puppet and his friends are surprised. He tries to lie his way out of it but nose grows long and all of the other kids starts laughing at him.
| Disney girl 9/23/12 . chapter 10
Oh dear! This certainly is a fine pickle to be in. I hope Jiminy and Melissa hurry back with help and clear up this whole thing. Oh and Eugene is a little stinker. Keep up the good work.
| Kimball20 9/11/12 . chapter 10
Holy crap you finally updated! This is really great and I hope they get Pinocchio out of jail.
| Shychick 9/9/12 . chapter 10
I'm very sorry I did not get back to you sooner when you had noted me on DA. I've just been very busy. I would love to beta-read your story for you! It's my pleasure to give critique and advice, and of course, tell you how much I am enjoying this fic! :)
I really loved this chapter! Poor Pinoke! He never goes looking for trouble, but trouble always seems to find him!
Just one thing that kinda stands out- Annabella telling Jiminy that he is "talking out of his ass". That sort of slang is far, FAR too modern for the time-period, and just doesn't fit at all. Perhaps she could have just said "Once again, you don't know what you're talking about." Also, and to a slightly minor extent, I realize that Annabella is no push-over, but it still seems very unlady-like and improper for a woman of that time to use such language.
| Guest 8/8/12 . chapter 5
That story is pretty funny. It made me laugh as I read it. But it's pretty cool, too!
| MysteryGirl 4/20/12 . chapter 7
Listen to me, you don't know me, but you have to listen to me. It's a matter of life or death. Do not under, any circumstances, pair Melissa with Jiminy. It would be a disaster. And wrong. Just plain wrong. Also I like your story. Are you planning of having Melissa turning back to human anytime soon? Cause I kinda want to see want she can do as a human.
| ChuckyDoll 9/17/11 . chapter 4
I like Melissa's character, particularly when she says that Pinocchio is too young to see this. Did you purposely apply double meaning to the lyrics? I thought they were hilarious. I love the relationship between Jiminy and Melissa and if someone else wrote the story, their first instinct was to make it a Jiminy/OC pairing.
| The Beatle Dalek named Eponine 9/10/11 . chapter 9
i am in love with this story! please update soon:)
| Shychick 9/27/10 . chapter 8
What a wonderful chapter! Well worth the wait! I'm glad you made it very realistic, in the sense that Pinoke was having trouble learning the alphabet on his very first day. However, I do think you should've had Jiminy lecture him for hitting Eugene. They did sorta scold him, and Pinoke was quick to realize that he shouldn't have done that, but I still think it would've been better if the crickets emphasize that violence is never the answer, that it can only lead to trouble.
I LOVE the idea of giving the crickets a dollhouse! That's just perfect! Why didn't I think of that for my JC fics? You also put a lot of detail in it!
Ohh, I can't wait for more! You do an excellent job of keeping everybody in-character, and the new characters are very interesting. I'm guessing Pinocchio is going to have a crush on that girl, hey?
| NobodieZ 9/5/10 . chapter 8
Great chapter. Lots of things happening.
| Kimball20 9/5/10 . chapter 8
That was really good. I hope the rest turns out good. I love the house, it sounds adorable. I also like the fact that Melissa mentions that she needed to use the bathroom.
| Shychick 8/21/10 . chapter 7
Please, PLEASE don't tell me you've given up on this story! You haven't updated all summer! *cries*
| Kimball20 8/14/10 . chapter 4
The scene with Jiminy looking at the french puppets was hilarious.
| NobodieZ 5/7/10 . chapter 7
great orignal chapter, Kodos on adding the deleted scene from pinocchio