aw updatee

wow you did so well good job and im happy to see hte end and it's so cutee anyway 10/10 _

hay wow you are doing really good and good job and this part is really Deep (the Aakane Part win shes Crying poor Akane )KEP going!

WHOA! So far beast! That was amazing. I love how Ranma's like "Rightfully mine" lol. Very possessive Mr. Ranma.

hm maybe she can try to kill hersilf and thin um

Ranma see this at the list momet and Akane kill's hersilf but Hataro see that Ranma love's akane so much he give Ranma somthing that make's akane com Back or som thing i don't know but i was thnking that maybe som thing over the top maybe cool lol lol sorry ill try to thank of som thing

Oh now i rely Can't wait to see more your doing good

RanmaAkane ForEver*

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Wait, Akane just got hit in the STOMACH with a KNIFE! She needs MORE than just simply getting her wounds dressed by the maids. The Prince should be rushing her to the hospital or the royal healer to get a check up and possibly operated on if that knife did life threatening damage to her stomach. Plus depending on exactly WHERE in her stomach it hit, it might prevent any chance of either him or anyone else getting an heir out of her. *lol* Plus all the injuries she got trying to protect Ranma from getting hurt couldn't have been good for the stomach wound either, so she could be slowly bleeding to death down there.

Oh man! he is a Basterd! (Wait maybe he does know his Dad seeing as he may be a Ken lol) but anyway have Fun

teehee your welcom and Oh this is good and have Fun on your trip! _

No! you got to get the end out ! im loveing this so much Nikki

but hm

maybe win a gard com's to till ranma and ryoga and shampoo somthing about the wedding to make ranma madr and thin win the gard turs around ranma garbs the guy and get the kye's and i think you can get it form ther mm? i hope to see this com out

Oh i just new she wood take the hit lol i new it lol sorry 6/5 keep it coming

Please update!

Genma and Mousse were hilarious LOL. Interesting thing about the kimono and powerup. I would have thought Ranma would have responded differently when told Akane hated him. Something along the lines of the usual insults. Things felt like they moved a bit too fast though. It wouldn't hurt to make things move slower in parts in a few parts.

nice idea but to on side. you did get any of the other charitor involed and the argerment was for ranma to marry a tendo why i mention this is if he is a prince then he should of had sopme back ground info on whats going on

the story have some fast pacing and kind of a bit rush... i'm not sure if i like it or not but i like how you incorporate the clothes of akane to her skill for being fast and strong... update soon.