This was excellent. Edward has such a firm grasp on Bella and the way she thinks, it's amazing.

Gah! So good, deb. That book sounds awesome, need to check that out! And I def like Bella as the more forward one. Such a nice change. Can't wait for your next chapter already!

I love this story! Edward and Bella are always meant to be together!

Woohoo! loved this chapter, so nice old fashioned not quite lemons but maybe soon. Beautifully written deb, I really love Rose she is sweet. I love this Edward and Bella, its nice not to have all the angst right from the start if you know what I mean.

I am really looking forward to the next installment Deb

love Sue

GAH! I love it, and I love that the book was thrown in there... good way to introduce the sekks ;)

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so funny and cute!

edward and bella together for ever!

lol we did still have wood, heh heh.. great chapter Deb... loving the story so far and the little mini-lemon was nice ;)

Deb, I love your version of Bella and Edward, they are going to fall hard for each other...and they are getting pretty close already.

Looking forward to the next chapter xoxo

Lovely story! Can't wait to see what happens next!

I truly love all of the detail in this; and such a unique take on the ExB Story. Lovin' it!

*sigh* Oh yes, we had wood! And since I know what happens next... ah, but that would be a spoiler! Deb, it's just getting better. Keep up the good work, bb! *mwah*

Good thing my computer chair has no fabric on it.

Her eyes were closed, her lips parted slightly, tiny breaths panting through them. Without opening her eyes she tilted her head to the other side, silently asking me to continue. I smiled and brushed my lips back and forth behind her other ear, whispering, “Tiger, tiger burning bright” then placing the matching kiss on her other collar bone, murmuring “in the forests of the night…” My lips pressed firmly into the hollow at the base of her throat. “What immortal hand or eye…” I inhaled deeply; even in this brisk, fall weather Bella smelled warm and sweet, toast and jam, and I swallowed as my nose traced along her throat, past her chin. We brushed lips and whispered together, “Could frame thy fearful symmetry?” This whole paragraph was incredibly sensual. Well done.

Your Bella is adorable and Edward is so besotted. Great update!

Hi Deb,

That was so good. So romantic, Im a sucker for romance. Cant wait for the next chapter! looking forward to tonight (the telethon)

Yay! Dream Girl's on the scene! Story's starting to heat up... I absolutely love your pic of Rose's house - it's exactly how I pictured it! And it still makes me laugh to think of Carlisle in Australia, all sparkly in his cork hat LOL! Keep up the great work, bb!