 Starling-Night 1/11/10 . chapter 3Ah this story is epic win! I really enjoyed the two chapters from Pearl's perspective - the way she thinks is just so brilliant. I loved it! |
 Blue Deity 1/4/10 . chapter 1It was very cute. I liked how Maya could seemingly do nothing wrong in Pearl's eyes and Pearl's youthful naivety is portrayed quite well. That being said, the last chapter is a bit off, but this is a minor criticism as the story is amusing and a joy to read. |
 Riddikulus-Grin 1/4/10 . chapter 3it's a cute story, but the kiss bit was a little akward - they seemed all out of character. It's still a ni story though. |
 ChloboShoka 1/3/10 . chapter 1Aww this is so cute. I liked how it's all in Pearl's style. |
 Yumi-chan-likes-chainsaws 1/3/10 . chapter 3Aww! Th5s was cute! |
 Justis76 1/3/10 . chapter 3I adored this story. All of the chapters were really cute. |