|Reviews for Torn|
| 77049sma 1/28/10 . chapter 1
aw...so sweet and sad at the same time make me wanna cry lolz but i liked it
| Charmie77 1/26/10 . chapter 1
this is so MARRIAGE...you fight and you make up...and hope that the next fight won't be so bad...god this could have been me and my hubby this past year...which was really rough for us!
| archie-01 1/25/10 . chapter 1
I thought of the photo while I read this. So perfectly matched. So sad, and yet so hopeful, and realistic. Thank you for sharing your talent!
| glitteratiglue 1/24/10 . chapter 1
This was absolutely beautiful - heartbreaking, but with a hint of hope. It's interesting that you wrote a piece where E/B don't necessarily live HEA. This seemed very realistic, and indicative of stages most couples go through. You really conveyed their love for each other with the hope that they'll work things out together. I loved it! x
| london spam 1/23/10 . chapter 1
So sad and conflicted, but sweet and loving at the same time.
| BethMasenCullen 1/16/10 . chapter 1
This is beautiful even if it is sad!
| Captain Jezebel 1/15/10 . chapter 1
This was so very real bb. I loved that their life didn't end up cookie cutter perfect because that is set closer to reality for most couples. Marriage is work...lots of communication, lots of love, and lots of understanding.
Beautifully done, good luck
| SherriB 1/13/10 . chapter 1
WOW is all I can say. Just that little passage hit me hard. Sometimes in marriage, feelings and identities get lost. It is unfortunate, but that is what life is all about. All you can hope for is that the good times outweigh the bad. Thanks for the great reading. Sherri
| rockiestwitwin 1/10/10 . chapter 1
So sweet! This is such a great little snippet of how sometimes life can be really crazy and marriages can be shitty but in the end it never hurts to just say "Sorry" and mean it.
Love, as always,
| Milalencar 1/10/10 . chapter 1
This one left me alittle sad.
I know it has a hopeful ending, but it is still sad to see how often people let themselves get caught up in traps and ruts and forget the most important things in life.
But again I feel amazed how you can bring us into these worlds/realities you create so easily.
| the real teacher 1/8/10 . chapter 1
this one could most definitely be woven into a complete story! I liked it!
| obsessedmom 1/8/10 . chapter 1
Beautiful... amazing how different eyes see different things in the photo.
| Rosmarina 1/8/10 . chapter 1
This one hurt to read. In a good way though, bb, in a good way.
| yogacat 1/8/10 . chapter 1
so real and yet..full of hope.
it was beautiful.
| HopeStreet 1/6/10 . chapter 1
I read both of your stories today and I can't even begin to place liking one over the other. They are both excellent. I can see the development of this into a longer fic. I still want to know what is up with Bella and where her anger and distance with and from Edward is coming from.