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Little Hinata Chan 7/8/03 . chapter 1
YAY! Fuu and Ferio are my fav MKR couple! Ferio is HOT, and Fuu is so cool! That was great1, I was on tears!;-;
Fuu Hououji 5/10/03 . chapter 1
Oh, I forgot this before. Here are the actual lyrics:

I brushed against those freckles that I hated so,

Life goes on and I heave a little sigh for you.

It's heavy, the love that I would share for you,

But it dissolves like it was just a sugarcube.

Now the little pain sitting in my heart

Has shrunk in a bit, but it really does hurt me now.

Those silly horoscopes, I

Guess I can't trust them after all.

If we could get further away,

I wonder what it would be like... ?

Yay!

I'd be so happy

Inside my heart.

All the memories I have are beautiful in my mind,

But they don't feed the hunger deep inside my soul.

And tonight I thought,

I'd be just sitting in my sorrow.

And now I must wonder wonder why.

What did it really mean to you?

I just can't see it anymore!

I just can't see it anymore...

Oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh...
Fuu Hououji1 5/10/03 . chapter 1
Huh? Freckles? The Kenshin theme? For a MKR fic?Right! Well, even if your song choice was a little, odd, the ficcie is good.
FuuFan-squirrel 4/29/03 . chapter 1
hi! I liked your story alot and it has given me some great ideas and dont worry i wont copy it.
penwalker 4/11/03 . chapter 1
wow! fuu and ferio are my favorite mkr couple! :D and two more wows...you know kaliko rosa! _ *is flabberghasted* and number two...GREAT FIC! _ i love your song fics (and normally i'm not a huge fan song fics themselves. that's a big compliment from me :P) and your poetry...and...jeepers! you're just so talented. _ *claps* ferio rescued fuu...poor fuu though...so many love triangles _ *eyes do swirlies* but it's a happily ever after ending! so it's all good! :D
Orenji Yume 4/5/03 . chapter 1
nicely done. _ i'm not a big fan of fuu/ferio, but i noe they're a couple. definitely not ferio/presea.
MKRFan 9/26/02 . chapter 1
This is so beautiful! I love it. Fuu and Ferio are the perfect couple. The way you put them in this story is just fantastic! I hope to read more of your work.
nanachama 9/1/02 . chapter 1
go0d story
Nikkicub 7/21/02 . chapter 1
Whee, FuuxFerio! Great fic as usual... and pay no attention to the folks who keep telling ya the song's called "Freckles", personally I think "I Just Can't See It Anymore" fits the fic better. So there! O-kay, enough rambling from me...
Mistress-Kagayaki 4/14/02 . chapter 1
That was sooooooooooooooo KAWAII! You are a great writer! Keep it up!
Umi-chan4 2/4/02 . chapter 1
This was a cute and enjoyable read. Yeah...the song is called "Freckles" but I could care less about that since the fic is good. Oh and I thought it was neat how you took a Kenshin song and applied it to Rayearth. Kudos!
Kuyami Hatsukaze 1/24/02 . chapter 1
Good ficWrite moreI love F&FBut I think the name of this song is called 'Freckles', and some line of the lyrics was wrong. I think you should check out the lyrics in here: .
everyday-dream 1/23/02 . chapter 1
Very good, Lauren! The RK theme in a songfic...I never thought of that. Great idea!y
Emerald Princess 1/23/02 . chapter 1
This was such a good story. You had me worried for a little bit, that Ferio and Persa were going to tie the knot. You did a really great job!
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