That was a really good emotional

Really good chapter! Next one very soon please!

its hard to trust someone when they have broken that trust lovely chapter hon cant wait for more please

This good. Love it.

This is a make me cry story, but I loved it. Every second of it. I love that you didn't make Tamara into a total psycho. She seems nice, just not the girl for Derek. The plot line is really interesting, and Amelie was a pleasant surprise, along with Gabe's proposal. I like the CSI:NY references, since that is a pretty rocking show. All in all, a prety awsome job.

The only thing I don't like is how it uploads in , it looks a bit funny, and all on top of each other.

Great story!

Dame

I'm glad he told her finally how he felt. Now he just needs to get divorced and win Pen back

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But its always so much fun hating Tamara! ... :(

Hahaha, cant wait to see what Derek does

I am glad that you made Tamara go out with some dignity. Although she was never ment to be with Derek in the first place, she is still the mother to his son, and n amicable alliance with her would be the key to ensuring he continued to be a part of his son's life.

Wow, cannot believe that he has actually bitten the bullet and fessed up. However I think after all the heartbreak that Garcia has gone through. It is going to take a while for their relationship to recover fully.

I think that you have taken this story exactly where it needed to go (had me worried for a moment;). Great update. Cheers:D

Ok now we really know that this is fiction, but I love it. Now to get Garcia to trust him and stay with him. I think Tamara should have a talk with her. Great chapter, more please soon.

Tamara being nice was a welcome change..Liked that there weren't too many explosions between the two for Dj's sake.

oh honey that was awesome and your right everyone does paint her in a bad light. its good to see someont doing it differently. loved the chapter i kind of feel sorry for Tamara but she knew they were on borrowed time. cant wait for more please

Really, really great chapter! I loved their talk and that Tamara understands. Hopefully Derek will listen to her and do something to keep Penelope from leaving again. Can't wait for more!

I am glad that Derek heard she was at his wedding. That should show him how much she truly loves him and how deeply he hurt her.

I hope all is fixable. Pen and Derek deserve a Happily ever after

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Great chapter! I'm glad Penelope's not just forgiving him. Now maybe they can fix things. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how the next conversation will go!

She is being extremly strong and real. I hope the next chapter shows that he can fix it. Please more soon. They belong together. Derek, Pen, and both babies.