Hmm... where to start? Yep, it was a bit slashy. Not my cup of darjeeling at all, if I'm honest, but there we go.

This was very well written, though. The scene was set wonderfully, and the sense of warmth, of belonging, that I think was going through Red's mind (it did seem to be him) came across without really having to be said. That's no easy trick, Prime, and you did it well. The idea that soldiers on oppsite sides of the conflict could find solace with one another, possibly because they feel isolated from their brethren by their respective personalities, is certainly thought-provoking (and, in which case, I would submit that Soundwave might be a possible choice for the 'other party'?)

So, while I might not be entirely at peace with the subject matter, I did end up liking the chapter... well done, my friend.

Blue

Another good chapter, Prime. This isn't the kind of angle you generaly see done with Galvatron; normally we just get his 'evil psychopath' moments, or else some rambling semi-emofest where he pines over his lost life as Megatron (and, thank Primus, I only ever saw that once!) Here, you got inside his head nicely, and rounded out his character, and his acceptance of his own biggest flaw, with style.

Keep up the good work, my friend.

MyBlueOblivion

Ooh, good start, my friend. Vector prime is, for me, one of the more interesting characters to inhabit the Transformers canonverse. The ideas you put across here, of his having power over time, but being its servant in all things, was nicely done; there's a kind of slow, heavy acceptance of everything that comes to pass, if that makes sense... which I thought you put across very well indeed.

Also liked the thoughts he had on changing the past; the Butterfly Effect, as it is known, making changing the past no small or simple thing, even for one with the power to do so. Great stuff, PR, great stuff indeed.

MyBlueOblivion

Nice short insight into Galvatron. I've only watched the first and second eps of the Headmasters series (i think), but are you referring to Soundwave's death here?

Ah, a Vector Prime perspective story. Was about time someone did this. Good job on telling his dilemna and responsibilities as a keeper of time.

I suspect you were referring to Optimus's death toward the end.