This was an ok-written story, but completely unrealistic:

1. Ellie is sarcastic, not psychotic.

2. She wouldn't just kiss Sean, she would need persuasion.

3. Sean isn't violent towards Ellie, he wouldn't hold her against him against her will.

4. If he did get her to kiss him, it wouldn't magically cure her cutting; she wouldn't just give up her coping mechanism like that.

Heh, enough with the characters.

Writing critiques;

1. More description.

2. More (and more accurate) punctuation.

3. When numbers are less than 100 they should be spelled out. (Sixteen, not 16.)

4. One word; PLOT.

Keep writing...

sweet oneshot

sean & ellie make a good couple

Nice to see an Ellie/Sean story. Looking forward for more! Good work!