Hmm? Chapter 2 is the same as chapter 1. Ah I read it over again anyways. This is some good stuff! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon! Please please please!

Yay you continued it! Now i hope Nanoha doesnt reject Fate. I can't to read more!

Um...the first and second chapter are the same...O.o

Well either way, I like how the story is progressing. I hope you upload a chapter 3 that's well...different...soon.

Ok. Chapter 2 is the same as chapter 1. I look forewrod to a different chapter in 3.

Well, chapter one and (especially) the prequel story are both pretty angsty... but amazingly you've changed the tone for chapter two into very light-hearted, sweet, and playful. Very skillful and enjoyable writing, Yuki-chan! I really like the direction this story is heading. While I always love myself a good NanoFate fic, I would LOVE to read some Fate x Alicia fics! There're hardly any around... I meant, twins need some love too! XD

But since the title is "Unrequited Love", I suppose the angst will return soon, and this pairing may not end in happy-ever-after. Nevertheless... I still root for them anyway! X3

wow Alicia :D can't wait when Fate finally meet with Nanoha X3

it's nice that you write a story for your friend XD I like that

glad you feel better Yuki-chan but I must know what mood do you need to be in write a happy ending and how can I keep you in that mood :)

So...Alicia has a crush on her twin and Nanoha married that ferret-boy . What is his name again ? Alright Yuuno Scrya. I hope you'll let Fate meet Nanoha and kick Yuuno's ass away ! Muawahahaha! Um..sorry my bad harbit

Vivio is really cute in this chapter.

I'm waiting for the next chapter !

cute chapter!

oh alicia! yes u did P

i am really curious to see how alicia is going to deal with her love for fate.

woohoo u r back.. lol.. man been waiting... haha.. nice... LOL.. contiune.. LOL.. haha..hope u update soon..;p

Nice work. I like this idea. Keep up the great work.

I don't the first chapter being short Yuki-chan but I am glad you made this fic looks like its gunna' be good :)

Yay a sequel, cheers O

Love or lust? O_o

I hope Nanoha can be together with Fate lol

I hope it will end with a happy end, sad or bittersweet end are too much sad.

Seems to me there'll be plenty of material in this set up for a really good fic (but don't forget to put the happy end at the end of this story !).

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